Recent Comments

7/30/22, 5:23 PM
Hey man, you created a great custom file for me a while ago that encouraged me to have short hair and be clean shaven, I love it so much. This wasbr a cool story I'd love to see you write one focusing on going from shaggy bearded hippy to clean shaven/ clean cut jock, if you're ever into it ;)
7/30/22, 11:31 AM
Okay at first I was ticked because I thought he apparated inside the school grounds, but that ending. Sexy and still damn good cannon material. Bravo sir.
Good boy
7/29/22, 10:01 PM
Is that what happened to me?

7/29/22, 10:03 PM
@Good boy hmm, are you fucking your roommate on command? When your roommate says "who's a good boy, who's a big strong top?" are you going "woof woof I am!" and then fucking harder? 😉
7/5/22, 1:22 PM
Okay, so I have been thinking. Since almost everyone hates Rusty (as we should), I think it would be cool if Dusty will become loveable and heroic (maybe even ending up with Carter). It will show that Rusty had the capability to be loved but in his action he both ruined himself and created the one who would surpass him and "get the guy" instead of him, cementing the realization that if only he would have been nicer or more moral/caring/however you want to call it

7/29/22, 12:40 PM
@Reader Dusty is literally the same person as Rusty though. Like the only difference they currently have after Rusty upped his stats is that Dusty is subby.
R P
7/3/22, 2:44 AM
I vote Custom Special Ability. I’m still rooting for Dusty to come out on top, and I’m sure he has some great suggestions for what spells Carter could cast to make the scene hotter (and make sure it’s filmed from a dom/top perspective 😉) This another great chapter, seeing Carter get in to bottoming is very hot. Even if I don’t want him to be stuck as a dumb jock forever, it’s fun for the moment.

7/5/22, 1:35 AM
@R P Thanks! I wonder if I made Carter too likable by accident... I just wanted to do something other than the classic "homophobe jock gets turned out" but I may have created a monster.

R P
7/5/22, 6:49 AM
@bluesuedewho Haha! Subby Carter is a lot of fun, but he is so likeable (and Rusty is such a dick) that it feels bad to let Rusty have it all go his way. I think Dusty shows that Rusty has potential to be a more likeable dom, and it’d be fun to see Rusty tricked into some personality changes of his own.

easdf
7/5/22, 1:17 PM
@bluesuedewho I'll tell you what, I think the issue lies in two points: 1. Carter didn't do anything to deserve to be punished; his wishes are completely reasonable and he has been nice and considerate, so being used by rusty (pun intended) feels unfair and we root for him. Also Rusty's a dick 2. I think that dumbing down is a less popular fetish as it seems. If I try to put my finger on it, in my own personal opinion, it's because dumbing down is effecting both the character's personality and their agency. These stakes combining what I said on point 1, makes the protagonist-villain contrast more polarized. Having said all that, I don't think this is necessarily a bad thing. High stakes are suspenseful and even though it is less my thing I can't wait to see what happens next. It only means that people want Carter to come out on top (and safe) and to Rusty paying his price.

easdf
7/5/22, 1:17 PM
@easdf Wow, this ended up way longer than I intended

7/29/22, 12:39 PM
@easdf My problem with #1 is that like, almost no one deserves something like MC to happen them in real life. It would be the worst thing to ever happen to you. When people try to moralize in MC story it is an immediate turn off like "okay dude I get it, you didn't think the moral implications through and thought that one guy being kinda homophobic is on the same level as being stripped of your will and personality. Call me when you can just focus on writing a hot story." Like anyone who would do MC is a dick. Whether a story acknowledges it or not, it is an immutable fact.
7/29/22, 4:21 AM
Fantastic!! Please continue!!
WillingSoldier
7/28/22, 9:52 PM
I'm loving this. When will it continue?
7/28/22, 8:53 AM
Oh, this twisted story of the father-son bond really excites me. I liked the way the protagonist's despair was combined with the happiness of seeing his father again.
7/28/22, 8:43 AM
The story of a young handsome agent transforming into an old, hairy, bald, ugly underclass and sexually surrendering... There were so many elements in this story that I loved, it was almost mind-boggling. Thanks for writing a great story.