Recent Comments

9/6/22, 6:51 AM
This is such a fucking hot chapter! You had elements in here that I genuinely wasn't expecting, like Erik cumming every time his cock was hit. You could have written us 10,000 words on that and I still would have been shooting days after. Yet another triumph, and I'm looking forward to how your twisted mind takes care of Eli!
9/3/22, 2:40 PM
This is a perfect chapter

9/5/22, 10:12 PM
@Pisces142, wow! Thanks so much! :grin:
9/5/22, 8:36 PM
great story cannot wait for next
Rex
9/5/22, 3:45 AM
This story was amazing and I can't wait for more.. haven't connected to a story like this for a while!

9/5/22, 10:54 AM
@Rex Thanks!
Anonymous
8/6/22, 4:34 AM
Just wanted to drop and say that this is one of the hottest stories I've read in a while. I quite enjoy dubcon and this hit every single button for me, especially the descriptions of how Carter's brain was being almost physically manipulated to overload him with pleasure as he was being transformed. Even if the antagonist (nearly) won and Carter isn't quite back to normal by the time the story closes, the ambiguous ending definitely helps soften that blow. Like another reader said: if anything, I can always imagine Carter regaining his wits, but being stuck as a subby, cum-addicted bottom and reluctantly loving every second of it. Very interested to see what direction you're go from here, though. Would love to read more in this universe, but you should definitely take some time for yourself to relax. Trust that you'll have plenty of excited readers whenever you feel like returning.

9/5/22, 10:54 AM
@ Thanks! This story definitely burned me out a bit.
8/4/22, 1:12 PM
Wow so much engagement! You have clearly hit a note. I love it when a story gets so much reaction! Great writing!

9/5/22, 10:53 AM
@Mrdick Thanks!
Rex
9/5/22, 3:50 AM
This was one of the hottest things I've read in a long time. Sorry you had a bad experience and are not finishing it. I'd love to read more of this.
8/30/22, 10:41 PM
so happy to see this series again! really interesting continuation. i can clearly see how much care you put into developing the characters and their perspectives, since the word choice and what they notice is so purposeful. curious when darius will hear from may, or decide to reach out to her.

9/4/22, 9:51 PM
@Razz TFs Thank you, I try my best with attention to details for my stories.
8/31/22, 11:45 PM
It's sexier when Nick is a good boy for Darius. Much more fun when Darius is in charge.

9/4/22, 7:40 PM
@Heru Kane Personally I agree :D, but is getting good boy back going to be that easy?
Carmelo
9/1/22, 9:34 AM
You don’t even know how excited I was to see an update of this story. I check your profile literally every day! I really enjoyed this chapter! Darius’s awareness and realization of the situation was both exciting and haunting. I felt his feeling of helplessness throughout the story too…gave me chills! So many factors playing into the story. Who’s in control? What’s the source of the changes and control? It gets me excited to see how your story plays out! I hope we get to see more of Nick as a good boy. Alpha Nick is low key super hot but Darius in charge and Nick as a himbo sub top is what I came here for! I definitely can’t wait to see more smut too hahaha

9/4/22, 6:52 PM
@Carmelo Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And you are right there are questions that certainly have to be answered. As for Nick and Darius... I wonder who is in control? Well, I'm sure they'll figure it out in the bedroom.