Would like to read more like this…..interesting story…..very well done in my opinion…..I like it…..can’t wait to read what’s next…..

just like mike: I need more :drooling_face:

I simply LOVE this story. The way the characters feel hopelessly submissive to one another is just so hot.

Hot new installment! Mike's exhaustion and the perils of the little bench were fun (and the fact that he couldn't avoid seeing what was happening on all the screens.) I hope Mike doesn't give in too easily. The tension between how he sees himself as macho and dominant with the realization of what the older man wants him to become is where a lot of the enjoyment is to be found. Who is the real Mike? Is he outraged by what is happening or is he manipulable as he gets more turned on by events?

Damn why didn’t you continue this one?!

Needed to be proof read and edited before posting. So many wrong words - you could tell what he was trying to say, but seriously, it needed a simple edit. Zero mind control in this story....

Can't wait to read more!

Time for an updated summary of everything that is going on here: 1) Base Nick - Your classic straight* himbo: big, dumb, and kind. Can be a little full of himself, but kind to his friends, teammates, and roommate. Has a magic* dick that women are attracted to, and when fucking puts both partners in "the zone" and they black out/go on automatic; we don't know if this effects dudes. Listens to dudes (he respects/ with authority?) To such an extent that they can make him cum or change his way of thinking (though there is a chance something else magnifies this). Wants Darius to be in control of him. Might be into pup play. 1.1) Hypnotized Nick - Gwen's computer program has hypnotized him and is making him a douchy gay jock bro. He's becoming ruder, more controlling, and much more critical of everyone around him. Thinks he knows best and everyone, including Darius, should just listen to him and do as he says. Much more "dominant". Still wants to be with Darius. Unaware 1.2) Cursed Nick - Deborah has cursed him, possibly to be more of a dom top. When he us assertive he gains muscle. Teammates, opposing players, and his coach feel sick when they oppose him and are much more willing to back down and follow him. Ill effects might go away when they listen, and they seem more inclined to do so. Darius hasn't gotten sick from him yet. Still wants to be with Darius. Unaware 1.3) Puppy Nick - Gets joy out of listening to Darius, wearing his collar, and doing what he says. Generally kind and more willing to try to be a better person. Often says this is exactly what he wants and has consented to, but Darius has doubts. Can (currently) override alpha douche king. Aware 2) Base Darius - Gay guy, decently in shape with some muscle tone. Attracted to his roommate and worried about having so much control over someone. 2.1) "Hypnotized" Darius - Intended to make him a submissive gay beta. Broken from a combination of him already being gay and his father calling during the first dose. Immediately sends his computer away, so doesn't fets the 2-3 weeks of dosing Nick got. No known lasting effects. Aware 2.2) Cursed Darius - Deborah has cursed him, possibly to be more of a submissive bottom. She thought it would force him to listen to whatever she asked him to do, but doesn't seem to. He loses muscle when he is submissive to Nick, and Nick can force him to change his mind, including forgetting things. Unaware Am i missing anything so far? Looking forward to future chapters and being utterly shattered when Nick goes full on Alpha douche and loses himself, probably hurting Darius and effecting his mind as well.. (Hopefully followed by a happy ending, of course.)

I really really love the parts about respects, about the submissive being a full man with personal life (family, work, friends and so on). Thanks for writing a respectful and realist tale of TPE. This kind of story is needed as reminder for each and everyone of us.

This is such a fucking hot chapter! You had elements in here that I genuinely wasn't expecting, like Erik cumming every time his cock was hit. You could have written us 10,000 words on that and I still would have been shooting days after. Yet another triumph, and I'm looking forward to how your twisted mind takes care of Eli!