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Nov 22, 2021
boi98229
11/27/21, 10:37 PM
Oooops! i hope you weren't expecting me to wait for permission... ;)))) This story is impossibly hot! Really, what else did you expect? ...i think i might need some more mind control training.
11/28/21, 5:06 AM
@boi98229 Oh, you know, these mind control stories have a way of leaving their imprint. I'm sure you'll get by without further training ;). What a joy and privilege to have such a dedicated reader -- we're glad you've enjoyed the story so much so far! Really glad to hear that you're finding it hot ^^! From @Cuddle-switch: "We've started to write the next chapter and are about 2300 words in. I would be curious to hear about what you think the Golden Lattice ceremony is, and see how it compares to what we have planned!"
Nov 18, 2021
11/27/21, 10:17 PM
First story I've read where there is self-sucking! I'm loving this twisted tale!
Dylan
11/28/21, 12:01 AM
@tankonpoint Thx Sir, i try my best to surprise
Aug 31, 2021
boi98229
11/26/21, 5:02 AM
i do love a slow burn! The seduction is so much sweeter. i feel like the story is building and i'm being edged psychologically. It feels good, but as good as it feels, there is still that drive to bring it on. That said, i am off to the next chapter. (@time.to.occur Thanks for this one!)
11/27/21, 5:29 AM
@boi98229 Thank you! Glad that you're still reading and enjoying, and hope these next chapters help give you some of that sweet, sweet payoff! From Cuddle-switch: "The psychological edging is both happenstance and part of the point -- the pacing of the sex has to obey the rhythm of the story to some degree, and the story is our main driving force. However, we were still disappointed that we couldn't find a 'natural' way to put a proper sex scene in this chapter." ...Which is why Chapter 6 is basically all the sex! I think that for both of us, being invested in the character and narrative makes the power dynamics and the sensual parts that much hotter. It definitely takes more time to get there than the average story on here, though! Hopefully we can sprinkle enough sexy bits between the "sexy" plot to make it enjoyable.
boi98229
11/27/21, 8:21 AM
@time.to.occur It is said that sex is mostly in the mind. How can the mind get wound up without understanding the context in which the relationship evolves and sexual tensions escalate? For me there has been "psychological edging" starting with the original conversation between Rhys and Jasper at the concert, and jumped dramatically when Jasper was caught and subjected to the new mind control technique. Every time Rhys and Jasper experience a moment of special connection and Jasper learns to trust Rhys more deeply and enjoy more freely, the thought of being a pet starts to feel less wrong and more right. Those are all important steps in Jasper's true submission and the power shifts in their relationship. For me, the seduction in an evolving D/s relationship is this shift in power, and every bit as arousing as the pure sex scenes. This psychological shift is, again, for me anyway, a huge part of the context that makes the sex scenes that much hotter.
11/27/21, 10:52 PM
@boi98229 That's delightful to hear, and Cuddle-switch and I both agree with that sentiment pretty well completely. It both increases the stakes of the sex scenes and gives meaning to particular acts. From Cuddle-switch: "This person gets it."
Nov 27, 2021
11/27/21, 1:38 PM
I really LOVE this series! Hopefully it doesn't last too long for the next sequel to be published.
Nov 14, 2021
11/24/21, 11:18 PM
This was so damn hot!!
11/27/21, 1:01 AM
@SlaveBoyJG Thank you!
Sep 12, 2021
11/25/21, 4:57 PM
Love this story. Waiting on for the next chapter with the transformation and the muscle tissue. I can't take much more edging. My imagination is running wild.
11/25/21, 9:39 PM
@TexMuscle I appreciate the continued interest, as well as people's patience. The story will be posted in time for Christmas, but I am new at this and rather slow! I know exactly where I need this story to be at the end but the in between parts have been resistant to my cranking them out.
11/27/21, 12:51 AM
@amul All we want for Christmas is an orgasm or 12 days of orgasms. auto correct got me earlier. tissue should have been titties. @absman420 started my fettish with his legendary milkman stories.
Nov 22, 2021
11/24/21, 7:45 PM
What a wonderful chapter addition. I continue to marvel at you and cuddle's detail work put into world building. I particularly liked how Jasper asked for something that Rhys couldn't just snap his fingers and deliver, and the sort of protective response it drew from Rhys. Adding an element of vulnerability into the otherwise unassailably powerful coins adds a unique texture which I think may prove a useful nucleation point (in terms of Zeus's affliction). Although there are often power imbalances which favor the "dom" (Rhys), I do appreciate it when there is an avenue for vulnerable inroads for character building. It tends to add color to what otherwise might be somewhat monochromatic. The current trajectory of their relationship definitely tends towards something more meaningful than what might be otherwise implicit in the designations of "Owner" and "Pet" at the surface level which is far more interesting to me. I shall personally continue to hope this trend continues :) I also appreciate how Rhys is perceptive enough to notice the changes in Jasper. It seems like it should become obvious to him over time that something unusual is occurring. I do wonder what his reaction would be to knowing what was being done to Jasper. I am quite delighted that you have delved into the specific of Rhys's past pet. It does seem rather like this fact coupled with Aris's current modifications to his pet might have an interesting culmination--or even argument--between Rhys and Aris. Up to this point, it has been explored how good it feels to Jasper when Rhys is pleased. I am curious what a negative emotion (not necessarily directed at Jasper) might engender within Jasper. Backstory work is always welcome. Thus far, we have seen lots of scenes where Rhys and Jasper have been out amongst others. I am quite curious what measure of domestic interactions this absolute adoration might bring forth. And of course, to see how the gradual restoration of the silver river might provide an ongoing plot point. I absolutely tip my hat to you both for continuing to write all of this so well and work in lovely allusions. Your RPs must be really special to create such a vivid story. I am agog to see what happens next. I was quite delighted to see a new chapter appear and shall eagerly await your next installment Cheers and Thanks, ~Jayden
11/25/21, 3:20 AM
@Jayden Thank you so much for this kind, reflective commentary so far! Cuddle-switch and I really appreciate hearing what plot points and world building elements are speaking to you so far. We're definitely trying to put a lot of care into the lore of this world and explore the dynamics that these characters have to offer beyond just a D/s relationship. We'll definitely be aiming to keep that meaningful depth of character and relationships going! We're also definitely curious to explore some of the different sets of complications that we're slowly layering in and seeing how they interact! And you've given us some very interesting thoughts here about some scenes and plot points that might be interesting to push on further, some of which we've definitely got plans for and others that raise fun questions. From Cuddle-switch: "Yes, Rhys is noticing things, but he also wants this so badly that he's willing to avoid seeing things. I expect some up and downs there. As for the Coins, they can definitely be just as vulnerable as the rest of us, they just don't let on as much. Building in some of those vulnerabilities and showing Rhys being emotionally vulnerable hopefully shows that they're not unassailable. Also, doing this kind of detailed minor character development is new to me, and difficult, but I'm enjoying learning about it. Let's see what we come up with!" It's honestly a pleasure to collaborate with Cuddle-switch and write together, and I hope that shows. It's also a pleasure to hear that you're enjoying our writing. Thanks again! -- Time & Cuddle-switch
Jul 20, 2021
boi98229
11/23/21, 8:07 AM
@time.to.occur i agree completely with all the positive comments you have been receiving! i admit that i have what i consider a huge advantage over these other unfortunate readers. Since i didn't find your story until today, i already know i still have 6 more chapters all ready to read!! i figure that at your average publishing rate of 2 chapters per month, if i ration my reading to 3 chapters per month, i will still have about 4 months to be thrilled by this wonderfully enthralling story. The biggest problem with this plan is that since I already have an uncontrollable addiction to the characters, the plot, and all the intrigue (and sex to come?) in between, i expect i will finish the entire thing by sometime tomorrow. i think i might be in big trouble...
11/24/21, 4:28 AM
@boi98229 We're really glad you're enjoying the story so far and are so so flattered that you're trying to ration your way through it to keep the story going! cuddle-Switch says I should warn you that we posted most of what we already had written and from here on out, things might be a little slower because we're writing as we go. You're right that technically so far we've averaged a chapter ever two weeks! This also means though, that your feedback is especially welcome as we keep co-creating the world and story <3!
boi98229
11/24/21, 5:48 AM
@time.to.occur Perhaps i shouldn't reveal this as you may start to relax your creativity, but... i do have a fall-back plan! i have already checked and you still have several other stories i haven't yet read or at least haven't yet finished. The downfall there is that i might need you to start writing new chapters for those stories too! *The Little Black Death* is one of my all-time favorites. I found it quite optimistic as it seemed that with the help of the aliens, humans might actually find a way to get along with each other. ;)) Glad to see your response to my comment at *Wild Pansies in the Fae Court* indicating that you are already working on a sequel to that story.
11/25/21, 3:09 AM
@boi98229 What a pleasure to hear that you're enjoying those stories, too! I'll do my best to keep the writing coming, with Cuddle-switch's help! Thank you so much. You've named some of my favourites out of my own stories, too! ^^ If you run short of material, I think our tastes might align similarly -- you can always check out my favourited stories list in my profile!
Nov 20, 2021
11/24/21, 11:54 PM
loved it! very excited to read more!!
Nov 16, 2021
11/24/21, 10:54 PM
Thank you, mate!!