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Anonymous
12/1/21, 10:04 AM
This is really well written! Can't wait for more!
11/30/21, 6:29 PM
loved the distended cum belly! great start, keep it up!
Nov 18, 2021
Zi
11/30/21, 5:40 PM
One of my favourite of yours. Always love rereading this, hopefully this time there'll be more!
11/30/21, 3:09 PM
great start! super excited to see where this goes
11/30/21, 2:38 PM
i'm definitely excited to see where this story goes in the next chapter. this story just keeps getting better and better and is very versatile and diverse. How i enjoy a nice turning of the tables.
11/29/21, 6:37 PM
So hot as always. An incredible series. I would love see more scenes of Jasper putting his pet status into practise. Don't get me wrong, the training has been fun, but it would be great to just see Rhys enjoy Jasper as a pet, whether its in private, out in public, or elsewhere. The sex scenes have all been so hot. Keep up the amazing work, can't wait to see more!

11/30/21, 1:42 AM
@Henry Wolf From Cuddle-switch: "Ohohoho, I think you're going to like what we have planned for the next chapter." Thank you! It's a huge boost to hear that you're enjoying the sex scenes and the buildup with the story! Looking forward to sharing more!
11/29/21, 5:49 PM
Another really hot chapter. I love this world you've created. There are so many things you could do with this storyline/world and branch off into directions. I would love to see more stories about this world (as long as you're enjoying writing about it!) I love the owner/pet dynamic and having them displayed in public, really erotic, especially when they're being shown off like property and the pets chat while the owners have their serious discussion. Plus, the blowjob scene/handjob scene, wow. Also, never realised there was more than one author, great collab!

11/30/21, 1:40 AM
@Henry Wolf Thank you, thank you! We've had a lot of fun putting energy into worldbuilding and I think we do both foresee a lot of different possible storylines and side tales. Some of that will be a part of this story, and some of it could definitely be their own standalone spin-offs. We're having a blast writing in this universe so far. Your encouragement means a lot! From Cuddle-switch: "Thank you! We're taking down ideas as we go and seeing if anything would make a good standalone after!"
boi98229
11/29/21, 9:38 PM
Hey @SlaveBoyJG! i love the storyline, and the characters as far as you have developed them. The theme of betrayal anywhere near to this extent is something new for me, and along with the kidnapping it was definitely very arousing. My only real suggestion, admittedly personal to my tastes, is that the whole thing would be better if it were all longer with more detailed character development and plot, if it held us in suspense longer, and perhaps the 'surprise' ending were more of a surprise. You might have satisfied me completely if you had included in the initial setup more about how James had gotten in deeper into debt and deeper in trouble with Mr. Masters, how that relationship developed. Somehow up front you might have set up the circumstances to obscure James' motivation and decision to betray Seth. More plot at the end would be nice too. Like, is Mr. Masters secretly into slave training and sales. What exactly happened after the kidnapping? Anyway, thanks! i like your thinking and will definitely be back to read more of your stories.
11/20/21, 6:09 PM
I miss this story badly.

Blackjinx123
11/29/21, 6:09 AM
@Erratic101, I'm so sorry for the delay! the chapter is finally done and should be up in the next couple of days. thank you so much for your patience! :)

11/29/21, 11:06 AM
@Blackjinx123 i hope it launches today!!
11/29/21, 2:21 AM
This is one of THE hottest stories I've ever read. I love the pet status that Jasper adopts, and how you delved into his psyche. I'm especially enjoying the fact that it's taking its time with the transformation, and it's quite a supportive/positive sub/Dom-themed story. The writing is incredibly well-paced and detailed, and you've clearly put a lot of work into the character's back stories and world building. Amazing job! Can't wait to keep reading.

11/29/21, 3:29 AM
@Henry Wolf Thank you so much for taking the time to say so! We're definitely having just as good a time writing this and delving into the details and lore as you seem to have had reading it, and we're really glad that this story is finding such a thoughtful and enthusiastic audience! It means a lot to hear you say that you're enjoying it! Cuddle-switch says: "We both agree that the lead-up and situation surrounding sex is what can really things up to the next level, and that's definitely what we're aiming for!" We're looking forward to continuing writing, and hope you enjoy these next chapters!