So I've been following this from the beginning and writing now because I'm surprised at how few comments have been made. I will also admit I haven't rated any of the installments because I'm not really sure exactly how I feel about them or the story as a whole. It started out alright, but then it is just sex on top of more sex...no real good back story or delving into various people's backgrounds or why this Mr. Dickenson is doing this stuff in the first place, how did he get to where he is? How did he and these doctor's get so far off the moral path? There is..something...that keeps me wanting to read them (fruit punch maybe? LOL) Maybe simply because I found the first couple chapters interesting and now hoping to see where this all goes...which is weird because I'm not usually interested in 'growth' stories. Guys smoothed (loss of hair), shrunken and with some form of embarrassment/humiliation whether private (internalized), familial, friends and or public is more my cup of tea. Not a big fan of the religious aspect...those scenes with the priest and/or candle - something I keep out of the stories I write (for my personal amusement) and it feels both wrong and disrespectful. I see poor Dylan ending up as nothing more than a sex toy no different from the recently mentioned BoyBots. From the writing perspective, it's my hope that Dylan is eventually freed from all of this, learns of his father's complicity in the whole thing...but is able to forgive him because he is as much a victim as Dylan. That's me...I know it's not real life, then again neither are the stories here, but I much prefer if not happy, at least equitable endings. So I'll keep reading, curious as to what other inventions the writer comes up with (I love coming up with new ideas, 'science', 'medicine', and such...sometimes its more fun than the story itself!!) and see how it ends. I cannot give it a rating and considering I look forward to the next installment would have to say it's more Good than bad - so if 0 is the worst, 10 the best...it's probably a 6 or 7, though a couple chapters would rate an 8 while I'd give the ones with a religious undertone a 2 or 3. Biased yes...but I think also honest.

this just seems mean

this might just be me but i really want to see Jay hypnotized as well

I really hope there's more to come.

As much as I low-key like the idea of Whit getting this "ultimate power" idea conceptually - i love where this is going and cant wait to see more! could make for a good inflection point with two alternate outcomes...

Okay! I'm primed! So hot, but oh so frustrating to have to wait for the next chapters! It's like being edged hard, and then left to twitch and drool with my hands tied behind my back. Please tell me the next chapter is already written and about to be published.

I love how slow and gentle this story gets. Really great stuff!

boi98229 11/4/21, 12:00 AM Thank you so much DomDad! What a wonderful experience and recounting. The fantasies created on this and its sister sites are extremely entertaining, but it is a rare treat to have someone tell us about their real experience, including how they felt and were transformed by it.

I have very much been looking forward to the next chapter of this story and it didn't disappoint.

Love this! Hot premise and incredibly well written. Can't wait to read more!