Recent Comments

12/9/21, 5:36 PM
very hot! looking forward to the next chapters!
Dylan
12/9/21, 4:24 PM
I love the story, cant wait for next chapter
12/9/21, 10:12 AM
The master of sex-writing does it again. Never in a million years would I have written a story like this with those tags. And the start of a new series? Word count who? Great job Soren!

12/9/21, 1:34 PM
Aaaaa, you warm my heart! I’m far from a master, but this is heartwarming praise, anyway. @Norismo
12/9/21, 2:44 AM
Mmmmmmph! This was absolutely perfect! Now that we have Anthony's full backstory I'm looking even more forward to seeing him convert Callum from his little brother into a hairless caged collared slave boi! (Hopefully with plenty more gear like hoods, leather, rubber, gags etc too!)
12/8/21, 6:24 AM
i love your story so far and as someone that enjoy robots i totally love the fact you enter boybots territory go ahead and cheers up continue like that boy!

Dylan
12/8/21, 8:40 AM
@Bazir Thk u sir! Right now i take a short vacation from Dickson City, but you soon see another chapter!

12/8/21, 7:32 PM
@Dylan Oh good...I was afraid that maybe the comments caused you to rethink continuing the story. That certainly wasn't my thought or intent when I made my comments. Please...enjoy your vacation and may it be safe.

Dylan
12/8/21, 11:38 PM
@Aaelefein I actually are rethinking the story and might bring it to an end. I don't have decided if i want this to be just a series of hot sex scenes or some mindboggling thriller. I guess it can't be both, since someone will complain. I have so many ideas by now that i maybe better begin a new story. But i guess i have at least enough to end this one. Poll to the readers: You want "Dylan" to leave Dickson County into slavery, into a happy end, or just stay and do what he does best ? A -B-C ?
12/8/21, 7:45 PM
Wooooof! This was a hot one. Hope we get to see little bros caging and slave transformation in detail. Can't wait for him to be a smooth hairless caged horny slave boi!

12/8/21, 8:34 PM
@Stormbound hehe...we'll have to see, though I know Anthony has longed to teach his little brother his proper place Also, thank you! I'm really glad you liked!
Martin
12/8/21, 7:38 PM
Lovely, really. Even though I'm not into fucking pussy (incidentally I had a date with a transman just a couple of days ago, where I just reconfirmed that to myself), you made this really hot for me...

12/8/21, 8:30 PM
I’m living for this compliment. It makes a writer light up when they know they made something fun or hot that you wouldn’t usually have enjoyed! I’m glad I got it right. More stories with Tobias and Killian coming soon… @Martin
12/8/21, 7:38 PM
Hot! Can't wait for the next part! It is a little unclear though what the status is of our cucks balls. Has he been cut or is the planning of that still in the works by the bull?
12/8/21, 11:59 AM
So great! I love all the humiliation
12/6/21, 7:44 PM
Dylan, This is mostly a reaction to something @amul mentioned...I had no idea that one a tag is used it's there forever and then applied to all chapters thereafter. My thoughts on this is either a specialized tag system for what I call 'one-offs', topics that might be offensive but are there for plot purposes only in a single chapter. If a new type of tag isn't possible, when there is potential controversial subjects which probably won't appear in additional chapters, do NOT tag it and place a warning about said content before the story starts, naming the content, that it's there for plot purposes only and isn't likely to be seen elsewhere in the series. I've seen some authors do this on other platforms and it seems to work well. Now there was another comment he made that I think applies to everyone...asking your readers for suggestions on how to direct the story as it continues.... If you are writing specifically for **your readers** than this is a fine approach...so go for it. But if you are writing for **yourself** this is a very bad idea...so let me explain... I write what pleases and appeals to me and when/if I decide to share it...if others enjoy it than great. I started a couple series on SlaveNow (miss that and my other yahoo groups), one was called **Modern Slavery 101**. I had a lot of people who liked it even though it was on the tame side compared to most of the other fare in the group. But then some wanted it to go a specific way...between that and the constant harping about *'Where's the next chapter?!!!*' It got rather off-putting and I stopped writing and posting as now it felt like a job rather than a hobby. Long story short...when you open it up for suggestions and direction...the story is no longer yours (there is a caveat here*) and at this point you'll likely either lose interest or what was fun becomes a chore. In either case you'll stop writing it. The caveat...my problem (well one of) is I start out very strong in the beginning and almost always have a good idea of the ending. It's filling in the middle part that bogs me down...more so as I don't want to get into a repetition (when you're covering a span of a whole semester, there is a lot of gap to fill in; especially when the first 7+ chapters is barely 2 days). So in this case, suggestions might give you some ideas you might not have thought of for filling in gaps in your story. Just my 2-cents. PS...for those of you who know of my Modern Slavery 101 story...while I have always hoped to get back to it; not only is the interest gone, but my writing...style and appeal has shifted since I wrote that 12-13 years ago: I don't believe I could carry on without it being noticeably different from the start. So no...it's not going to happen...not that I could post it here anyways...slavery, high school, teens with minimal, almost non-existent mind-control...not a good fit.