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12/15/21, 11:40 PM
This is one fucking hot intense story. Love the changes and how the kid slides right into them. He needs to be a fully grown man with muscles, tattoos, nips pierced, mustache and badass attitude by the end of summer. Smoking cigars? I dunno. Maybe to freak out the bullies and the teachers at the chickenshit high school. Does he need to return to high school as a mustached badass biker/pro bodybuilder. Maybe so, the effect on the assholes and peasantry would be truly epic. If the kid does return, maybe he could convert the bullies into his own outlaw biker gang. (Author's choice. I love this story, just keep it going. righteously!) This story is well on its way to be a classic. Just don't cut the story off before it ends. And then keep it going in a well-written sequel. This kid is one of those fictional characters who is developing and growing naturally, and already there is evidence that the kid character has a life of his own. Note to author: just listen to what the kid tells you about how he wants to develop into a world-class stud, and you will never want for a plot. You will soon have at least a novel on your hands, and a damned fine one at that.
12/15/21, 8:37 PM
hope we ll see the stud pierced, tattooed, fucked an fisted
12/15/21, 6:40 AM
great story can t wait for the next one
Anonymous
12/14/21, 1:39 AM
cool!! I hope there would be a sequel such that JD Hustler worked with his boss to capture and transform Jimmy’s friend, who try to find and save Jimmy.
12/13/21, 3:51 PM
Im loving this story. So hot and love the leather. Wonder where it will go
12/13/21, 3:42 PM
As a sub with a cock he sometimes wished was smaller, very hot and relatable.
Jack
12/13/21, 9:16 AM
This is a great story! I hope you keep it up!
Oct 11, 2021
11/6/21, 1:30 AM
This is so hot. Loved the fact that he's owned, used and treated like a pup. You really brought their power dynamic to life in such a short piece. The use of "boy" and "pup" was such a turn on. Can't wait to see where the story goes, especially with him being sold on. Just wondering, is he happy to be a sub top himbo, or was he forced into being owned/hypno, etc.? It's nice that he's absent-minded a lot of the time as it suits his himbo personality, but it might be good to have some internal thoughts to reflect on how he feels about things, e.g. the prospect of being sold, leaving his old owner, being seen as property, etc. as it would highlight the eroticism of his submissiveness. But an amazingly written and hot start! Well done. :D

12/12/21, 5:05 PM
@Henry Wolf hey, thanks for the comment. I tend to dislike what I write, so I eventually spurt one-shot short stories, kind of "in media res" kind of thing. I like to think that he likes, or loves, being a pet to his owner and I would guess it was somewhat agreed upon. Or as much as an agreement a "this or nothing" relationship can bring… Also thanks for noticing the "boy/pup" mentions, I'm a sucker for these terms of endearment. ;-)
12/11/21, 6:22 AM
well i can say a lot of ideas come to my mind but i like how you are developing this i also like good endings sometime but i have to vote for A leave Dickson city into slavery so in some way finally his father and family end abusing him in someway but since the entrance of tech on story i would like Dylan end more as a Prototype of an High Tech Slave more controlled by devices like collar and machinery or electronics more than the Fruit Pounch also maybe him be almost totally aware of what happening to him at that moment, maybe the doctors on story can make it possible and also he can be like a testing product for new sexual devices to be launch to the market

Dylan
12/11/21, 8:55 AM
@Bazir I guess you are aware that i changed the title of this line of stories some chapters ago into " A Dickson Enterprises Story : Dylan " I see a future of more " A Dickson Enterprises Story : XXXX " stories. We already met some possible characters, right? ;-) So new task for anyone who likes to help: Any suggestions ? You guys might wanna check the stories for : Johnny, who got his physicals together with me; Steve, the boy were the fruitpunch didn't work; Ryan the quarterback; Jose, Dylans buddy; Sammy, hitchhiker boy who was worked over by the Artimes twins; Jackie, Buddy from school, altarboy ; Vinnie, Jackies cousin in church dungeon; The asian boy in church dungeon; Jeremy, black boy 22yo, sold earlier as sex slave to german billionair; TBC;-) maybe

12/12/21, 6:16 AM
@Dylan ok then would be good Dylan end as i think, but i think maybe more fitting is Steve the boy that the fruitpunch didn’t work fit well for the setting i have said: end more as a test subject for the developing and testing of new tech in Dickson City and finally becoming a robotized slave with some modifications in the mouth and anus to convert him into the ultimate sex machine
12/11/21, 8:43 PM
Absolutely fantastic. Incredibly hot and sexy, with a fantastic balance of denial and release. I was really excited when you told me about this one, and it lived up to my expectations!!!

12/11/21, 8:52 PM
That's exactly what I was going for; I've never done this before, so I was worried it would get repetitive or something boner-killing like that. I'm glad I was able to write it in a way that kept up the tension without losing interest! @Razz TFs