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12/24/21, 1:50 PM
What can I say Derek? All of the guys above have already done that. It's been amazing to see the writers journey you've been on over the years with your stories, ideas and how you develop your characters. One of your experimental stories actually gave me the idea I am using for my Masters in Creative writing. Please continue, you are an inspiration for some of us. Your playing with various genres is always great to see too. Also, you have a talent for managing a viewers expectations and then surpassing them Now the compliment is done. That was also a damn hot story. Thanks. TC

12/24/21, 4:47 PM
Whoa @Tattcub! You can’t just drop that about your Masters and not tell me more! Which story? What’s the idea?
12/24/21, 10:16 AM
Very nice story. I liked the bondage part. I especially loved the ending where all of them "live happily ever after"

12/24/21, 2:00 PM
@Nephilim Thanks, Nephilium. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
12/24/21, 5:53 AM
This is the hottest damned story I've read in a hella long time. It just keeps getting better and better. The only thing I would recommend is proofreading the text. This is looking like a great novel to be posted for sale on Kindle. Get the small shit right--misspellings, etc.-- and it would be perfect.
12/24/21, 12:51 AM
I really enjoyed this, Derek. Like you, while I love unapologetically hot sex, I also love subtext and exploring how characters play off of each other. Blame it on my being a psychology nerd;) Dalton's mental shift is interesting, his use of power is unique, if somewhat unethical, and I appreciated how he met his match in the shopkeeper. Stories where a guy steamrolls all his unwitting guy friends wills get boring fast. Lastly, I love the "words making reality" trope, so thanks for including it.

12/24/21, 2:44 AM
Thank ye' @Hew Mesmer! This story was a risk, making someone smarter isn't exactly my typical MO. I'm really pleased to see how many people are finding it interesting and fun to read. I also love how many people are calling Dalton out for being unethical, as though most of the characters on this site behave ethically ;) I agree - stories can get repetitive if you just use the same mechanic over and over again. I actually really love Absman420's work for the way he takes a premise and applies it across situations to get a huge variety of engaging scenarios. I wrote a story earlier this year called "– and then the same thing happens to Bob" based off Absman's name for the problem where you want to keep a story going but inevitably perform the same transformation over and over. Everytime Dalton does a change (that we can see) he's also learning about his power and growing into a new person, so that naturally leads us to new places. I enjoyed the scene where Dalton is effectively experimenting to find which trope he's experiencing. I think experimentation to learn is one of the hallmarks of intelligence, so it makes sense that Dalton would see just how far he can push it.
12/24/21, 12:41 AM
A very enjoyable reality change for the frat! It was hot, funny, sweet, and a very pleasurable story to read. Maybe Dalton could be reminded to remove his cuffs from time to time to make the porn more orgasmic for him. I'm glad you removed the parts you mentioned where Dalton just changes people and tosses them away. Your story has a lot of heart.

12/24/21, 2:37 AM
Thanks @Cutlerfan! I had a lot of fun writing it, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. In the original draft, Dalton actually hired two security guards whose whole job was to force him back into the cuffs after he took them off for sex. In the published version, I think we can safely say that everytime Dalton stars in a shoot, the shopkeeper will be there to make sure he gets his smarts back after.
12/22/21, 8:02 PM
LOVED the story!!! But I love any Derek Williams story so there's that. Maybe I missed something, but I didn't see any gay to straight action...confused as to why it's a tag.

12/22/21, 8:59 PM
Thanks @thequirkyone! Josh goes from a gay dude to a straight guy who likes to sneak off on his girlfriend and get fucked by jocks. We don't actually see any straight action in this story because I don't really care about straight sex.

12/23/21, 9:30 PM
@Derek Williams Oh DUH! Maybe I've been dumbing myself down too much lol
12/23/21, 7:48 PM
The doctor may mix the different bull's milk in his own transformation. May even up the amount to make himself a bull's bull. How do you not play with the possibilities as the horny scientist. There was a old Josef Howard story "Muscle Service Station" that explored bull testosterone to transform men. Sadly no lactation but the main character was given an extra dose.

12/23/21, 7:54 PM
@TexMuscle Oh damn, you just gave me a really great idea. Hah. I'm not gonna say any more about that though. I think it might spoil things. -edit- I will say though that there's a reason the Doctor makes his bulls train their asses, and not just the cows. I'll leave it at that though.

12/23/21, 8:06 PM
@amul If you need someone to bounce ideas back and forth message me. Both heads are nodding along with the ideas running through my mind.
Martin
12/23/21, 8:00 PM
I wonder if Callum ends up being tamed and falling into his new role as his brother's boy toy...
12/23/21, 7:06 PM
Those are both great stories that unearthed this kink for me. Also love "Joey gets his Pecs Examined". I know authors probably hate when the fans say why didn't you include this or that in your story. Because this is your creative piece of work. I enjoyed asking questions and bouncing ideas around with Absman on the forum. I love to behind the curtain or under the sheet and learn the details that can't be included in the story. It's a sign of a great piece of work that after you come down from your orgasm that the reader asks what did you do to me and how did you do it? We have the desire to recreate that feeling and that moment. In your new world would mixing bull milk with bull cum in the feeding tube reinforce the sub dependent relationship? Can a feeding tube of cow milk create a bull? The power of his musk controlling Cody is very hot. PS your profile pic reminds me of a Stephen Amell muscle daddy that would fuck you all night long and you'd wake up with his dick still buried in you. Merry Christmas!

12/23/21, 7:15 PM
@TexMuscle I can't speak for others, but I don't mind offering the peek behind the curtain at all. Happy to do it. Perhaps it's helpful to others to see what got left on the proverbial cutting room floor, and why. Interesting, at least. There's always stuff that gets cut from my stories, usually secondary or supporting kinks that once I get into the editing process I take a hard look at and say "Why is that there? That's just there because it's your kink, it doesn't belong in this story, you horny bastard." And then just like *that* the stray little kink scene is gone from the story and everything is tightened up and more cohesive. It takes a clear mind to do that sometimes. I tried to convince Absman a little while back that there was no reason he couldn't put his spandex fetish into his new centaur novel. He basically laughed at me, smart enough to know not to throw the kitchen sink of kinks at his writing. I'm glad you enjoyed the musk scenes, it's a favorite of mine. I have no idea what would come of further playing with the muscle cow formula. If I wind up writing another chapter to this I will undoubtedly play with the relationship dynamics between dom/bull sub/cow because there will be more pairs of cops to write about and I'll need a way to differentiate between them and keep it interesting. I think for sure Thompson and Kowalski have more of a hardcore dom/sub relationship and not the daddy/boy relationship that you saw forming between Gutierrez and O'Connor.
Anonymous
12/23/21, 5:51 PM
very good