Recent Comments

KKA
1/5/22, 11:23 PM
stimle!!! such a big fan of your work! from San Diego so loved all the local references. I really loved your Taking-Down-A Good Cop series and looking forward to seeing more of your work!

1/5/22, 11:49 PM
Hey there! Thanks so much! It's nice to know you're a fellow San Diegan. Shoot me an email, will ya? stimle@yahoo.com @KKA
1/5/22, 2:04 PM
Loving this story!! Great
1/5/22, 1:58 PM
just love it, but i must also say that longer chapters would be much better to have a greater flow, with more details, like one is about JD's transformation, one about his cousin and maybe one about his dad or best friend. that would create a very intense bubble to fell into it
Jack
1/5/22, 2:36 AM
I love this story. I really, really do, but I would fucking kill to get a longer sex scene between JD and the Boss. I need some of those amazing details! Please!
offeringservice26
1/3/22, 7:36 PM
I LOVED this! Just discovered some new fetishes I didn't know I had!

1/4/22, 11:49 PM
It's always a goal to infect people with new fetishes lol ;) @offeringservice26
1/4/22, 7:33 AM
Excellent first person story. The way you walk though the thought process of the main character was very believable. The bratty push back he would consistently attempt as well as the initial concern for his safety in the beginning made him more realistic than someone more passive. It also made the turn of his submission that much hotter.

1/4/22, 11:49 PM
Thank you! 1st person is hard to get right so I appreciate the praise. I like that people are noticing and appreciating the bratty pushback. I didn't plan for it but it came out as I was writing. @ThisisDiz
1/4/22, 4:59 AM
The intersection of characters and story and fates. Like a gayer frank Miller tale or something Favorite were cops and jail and figures and tension there but all given distinct feel and voice Pigtown as..forget it Jake it's Chinatown sort of drama is surprisingly nice Love the depiction of the flesh and identity messing power and how makes him alike but different from the other specially gifted pigtownies Almost implying his power was his own not granted or grafted Ditto examining how pigtown now a complex interwoven growing system Seriously wish some poor sap would illustrate this with all the scenery movement surrealism and see But like no circulation potential so anyone decent turning thus into a graphic novel cost more than you likely make camming and and never make back from customers Still to me best pigtown as not just nasty but heartfelt either some more appealing elements 9/10 story.
1/3/22, 9:57 PM
A very creative punishment! I will say for me it was unclear exactly what was happening with the whipped cream and the oatmeal at first. They both seemed to come out of nowhere? Maybe a reference to either one earlier would make it a bit clearer. I have no idea where this will go next. How exciting. 😊
Mr. Jack Off
1/3/22, 7:30 PM
Cant wait for more! Love a good 'top-to-bottom' and 'power exchange' story .... especially with cocky studs in suits!!
1/3/22, 6:03 PM
Very strong piece of writing - thank you very much.