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naturallyInconsistent
1/10/22, 11:47 PM
Lidocaine works very well on me too and I'm also a caged sub. This story is so original and hot; Imma gonna try some of that!
Thomas97
1/6/22, 7:07 AM
it's a good start, although I would have preferred to get more information of this facility. so you could have started way before boy is captured and he could remember his escape from this institute, his background etc. then you could describe his capture and finally add your part here. nevertheless I like your writing. bondage is described well. maybe this dialogue between driver and officer is way to long for me and don't proceed story well. I would like to get more insight from victims point of view I'm looking forward to part 2:)

1/6/22, 9:00 AM
Thank you for the suggestions, I have provided some basic information about the facility. I believe this will solve some unnecessary confusion that readers have. Meanwhile, I realize there are format problems in dialogue that make it unpleasant to read. I tried to separate the dialogue to make it looks cleaner. I'm working on this series and I hope the next chapter will be better and legitimate officer's behavior in this chapter. @Thomas97

naturallyInconsistent
1/10/22, 11:13 PM
@darkfantasy The story is a bit short and ended abruptly. Looking forward to more. You could do a lot with this. You could enslave the nosy guy. You could have a officer's backstory. You could have the escapee's backstory. You could branch it many ways out. Excite us!
Elm
1/10/22, 4:43 PM
Another excellent addition to this great story! i finna have the time
1/10/22, 7:33 AM
REALLY glad you're back!

1/10/22, 7:49 AM
Thanks, @daemon - it's good to be back.

1/10/22, 8:57 AM
@daemon so am I!

Daemon
1/10/22, 10:22 AM
Mr Hardy is returning, yes? (pleading please). Can't wait for more of his repressed as fuck shenanigans, good and drunk and totally out of it. Gosh indeed.
1/6/22, 1:32 PM
i'm really liking this series keep going

1/10/22, 7:48 AM
@RedEnd Thanks so much! There are more (mis)adventures coming!
1/6/22, 11:03 AM
LOVE this chapter so much...

1/10/22, 7:48 AM
Awww... THANKS, @Jack Parker!!!
1/10/22, 2:19 AM
i would love to see a sequel and slowly show Tom slow become gay while hating every second of