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Spelt bred as bread
1/14/22, 7:02 AM
typo
1/14/22, 1:03 AM
Nice start! It looks like the poor narrator didn't come anywhere close to completing his training. Perhaps the officer will help set things right.
1/13/22, 10:25 PM
The scene in the basement was so good!
Zi
1/13/22, 8:08 PM
I'm loving this, can't wait for more!
1/13/22, 6:21 PM
Great start! Can't wait to see more of this story. Do hope that in the end the officer really is trustworthy though
1/13/22, 5:21 PM
Thanks for all the positive comments everyone!! I really appreciate them. I'll write a sequel for sure, I got a few ideas brewing for where the story can go next. We'll definitely get to know more characters, and I think we'll see Tony find his place within the pack while finishing his training lol.
Anonymous
1/13/22, 1:52 PM
right up my alley. the "meat" of the action could have stood to be fleshed out as it were, but terrific description and background setup. For dick-headed detail: background for Dumbo gives us his realization and tacit approval of being humiliated and used for his big cock. Dad's control over his body, cock and joy in making Dumbo flustered. by "meat" i mean the acceptance stage. "Dumbo" just sorta accepts his role as a stud, we don't get much of the inner conflict or tension at his breaking point as it sort of just resolves as "i wanted to kill him, I didn't" and then months pass. we get the idea that it just turns out he liked being a dumb breeding horse for his daddy instead but i would have loved to spend more time there and see how Dad turned that confrontation into role acceptance.
1/13/22, 12:19 AM
Loved this, and would love to hear more about Chance and Fairchilde.

1/13/22, 3:49 AM
@Beaner Thank you so much! I hope to write more with them!
Anonymous
1/12/22, 7:27 PM
Amazing story and hot to boot! Would love another visit to the boys in the future, or perhaps a different adventure with other characters in the fae court!

1/13/22, 3:48 AM
@ Really appreciate you taking the time to give me some encouragement! I'd love to revisit these characters or the world again, too! Thank you!
1/13/22, 3:28 AM
Wow, what an awesome debut story! I hope you'll continue with this series. Perhaps with a different character or different point of view, since I feel like we pretty much know how things are gonna go with Tony.