Recent Comments

Rubber_Lover14
1/25/22, 9:20 PM
As i said when i commissioned this, 10/10. great writing, and the commissioner sure has taste 👀 anyways love the story, cant wait for the rest of the story

2/6/22, 1:26 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 Thank you kindly, yes if the story is any good it's only because the commissioner had such a good idea ^^
2/5/22, 3:58 PM
OMG! so so SO HOT!!!
Anonym
2/3/22, 8:59 PM
Not gonna lie, this story is hot, but once you described the Prime Minister, I think I recognized him and that was a weird feeling. Your story writing and the hypnosis is very good, but I just couldn't continue to be aroused by it, once his face was there. But that's different tastes I suppose. (Since I have to know to sate my curiosity if I'm right... does the PMs name sound similiar to Furtz?)

2/4/22, 8:21 PM
@Anonym Interesting ... I had the opposite reaction. Your hint enabled me to figure out who this was, and once I googled some pics, I was much more into the story! :-)

Anonym
2/5/22, 12:16 AM
@Retrofantasia just to close to home for me I suppose. I dislike him in general and wasn't expecting to see a local politician here. But it'd be boring if everyone likes the same stuff. I'm glad my comment made you enjoy the story more

2/5/22, 5:35 AM
@Anonym i guess the mistery has been solved! i usually don't write about celebs etc. but first time i saw him i imagined doing to him what i wrote about. sorry to hear that you couldn't be aroused by the story!
Anonymous
2/3/22, 4:44 PM
Oh god, so glad you come back writing, I love your works so much!!!

2/5/22, 5:31 AM
@anonymous thank you so much! it means a lot
2/5/22, 1:11 AM
really liked it. I really enjoy fics involving politicians
Anonymous
2/4/22, 5:59 PM
very hot is there another part?
boi98229
2/4/22, 5:59 AM
I would like to offer three suggestions for this story and your writing generally. 1) I would really really like to try that punch. Could you please send me some? 2) I love your story! Your imagination and story are so hot, so please keep on writing! 3) Your grammar and wording are sometimes incorrect or awkward. I suggest you get someone to copy-edit (not for meaning or effect; only for grammar and wording).
boi98229
2/4/22, 5:43 AM
i like the way the story is going, but the mind control tactic would have been a lot more convincing if I'd been given a big glass of punch to drink as i read the chapter. ;))
boi98229
2/3/22, 10:30 PM
You have a magical way with words! I've just read all 5 chapters in both stories in one go. I love both stories! Looking forward to reading more from you.
2/3/22, 5:08 PM
Extremely hot! Glad to see you back at work on this series!