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LucasT
5/18/22, 10:34 AM
One of the most impressive stories I've ever read. Looking forward to next chapter. It was almost perfectly written. You know how to describe situations, people, characters. Really great work. I would like to see Chris turned into a drone. This arrogant, selfish boy destroyed and turned into something contrary to his original personality :D
5/18/22, 9:21 AM
Thank you all for the positive feedback. It’s really encouraging and I’m really glad you enjoyed!
Martin
5/17/22, 9:11 PM
Very hot! I hope you'll show how Chris is Pupped. And maybe his cousin, too! I've added your story to Gay Spiral. too, as it fits there perfectly well, too.

R P
5/18/22, 8:09 AM
I agree, it’s a hot story and I’d love to see how the cousins get pupped.
5/18/22, 6:13 AM
Please say there will be more!
5/17/22, 6:48 PM
Interesting and fun and enjoyable story. I liked the characters and the setting and the story. So yeah very fun!

NylonSpeedo
5/17/22, 9:38 PM
@Heru Kane Thanks for reading. This is a serial and I will have the next episode up in a few days. There will be lots of bondage to come.
5/17/22, 3:26 PM
Would love to see more stories especially of doc and the boss
4/11/22, 12:15 PM
I apologize that it took a while to get this chapter published. When I wrote Heat's 2nd chapter, I had a clear idea for the 3rd and final chapter. It would be all about Fresh Meat, his backstory and how he ended up in the sauna. But when I tried to write it, the story just kept falling apart. I tried over and over, with the same disastrous results. A couple days ago, I decided to turn my attention to the gym owner. And suddenly, the story began to flow. And now, chapter 3 is here. I don't now if there will be a fourth chapter. But I wanted to end it with the possibility. Think of it like a Marvel movie's post-credit stinger.

5/17/22, 11:12 AM
@rubbrsome frank and officer will not be satisfied until there is another chapter, just saying, incredible
5/17/22, 4:03 AM
Such a hot story, such lovely details. This will surely be one of my favorite drone stories now.
Martin
5/16/22, 7:54 PM
Fuck, what an amazing story! It was too hot to be true. The only regret I'd have as Juan or any of the drones is that they don't remember their drone time. For me this would be the ultimate reward... As it is, they don't really get to enjoy the orgasms that are granted to them, not even in retrospect. But please go on writing more stories like this!

5/16/22, 9:28 PM
@Martin thanks for the compliment, I like your work as well. Maybe memories might be an option, we’ll see where the next bits take it
5/16/22, 1:32 PM
While the story line was a bit convoluted, I found myself sticking with it because you got me interested in the characters themselves. This story stinks, and I mean that in the best possible way. Hypper, you've concocted a medley of odors and textures that drew me into the story in a personal way. The shared jocks, rubber and pissing assistance are powerful details. Although you took me into a dark world, there is also kind of a nice "ethic" that emerges on the part of Owner. He comes across as a lover, rather than just a sadist. You see this in odd ways.... like the annual "wake up" call where consent is reaffirmed ..... the correcting that the next wake up is not in 9.5 years, but in a year -- Owner is not going to take advantage of his charge .... Owner even makes sure that the drone's are staying current with their filings with the IRS. Odd details that give us some insight into the Owner/ownee dynamic that is strange but respectful. It appears that this is your first posting, and if it is indeed, you've come out of the gate charging ahead of the pack. Good job, Boi.

5/16/22, 9:01 PM
@Body Odor thanks for your comment. The stories get started during online meetings and written in bits and pieces. When all the blood has rushed elsewhere because what I'm writing about is so hot, the brain gets a little scattered hehe. I'll likely edit subsequent things a bit closer and on a laptop. Editing on iPhone only shows a 2 inch swath of text and I think it invites continuity errors. And yes, I unapologetically put my love for man scent into it. When I play IRL using hypnosis the best sessions are with the really piggy guys. When they show up with ripe pits in their workout jock I know it's going to be a good time. A lot of the small rules the drones in the story follow are fairly easy hypnotic suggestions to reinforce, although the degree of control with hypno is far less than Owner has. Yes this is the first thing I've written on here. I have a story or two on malebots dot com under the same author name. And I have Owner treat his subs the way I like to treat mine: I have mad respect for submissive guys who aren't inhibited about asking for what they need.