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6/6/22, 10:45 AM
i am looking forward so much to how collin and ian finally make the big reveal and the distraught and pain that ian will feel
6/5/22, 4:16 PM
Thanks for the comments, everybody! I'm drowning in WIPs at the moment, but the next chapter will likely be out next weekend.
5/28/22, 2:01 AM
I'm torn. I could see all three options being fascinating. I think I'm leaning toward getting Dusty to help, because I don't believe for a minute that Rusty can actually handle multiple subs. For the record, I'm really enjoying this story, and the way you've made it a sort of choose-your-own-adventure type thing. And you have such skill as a writer to get most people to absolutely despise Rusty in one story. And Dusty is a fascinating version of what Rusty could be if he'd be a little less, well, Rusty. I'm confused about Rusty saying that Dusty's dominance is so much lower than his new submissiveness. It doesn't seem that much lower, but I don't know how the mechanics work that well in this RPG, so I think Rusty might be overstating things. I'm curious what Carter's dominance score was before, too. I also look forward to seeing what other attributes get added to both of them and/or if any other new characters will be created. And lastly, I don't know how you're keeping all these stories in flight. I look forward to the continuations of the other ones you have going when you have time.

6/5/22, 4:12 PM
@Proteus Thanks! And you're on the nose with the observation that Rusty's exaggerating the difference between Dusty's dominance/sub scores.
6/4/22, 2:09 PM
Very well written and I love where the story is going. I’m rooting for Brandon!bv

6/4/22, 2:45 PM
@SlaveBoyJG Thank you very much. It's really nice to have some feedback!
6/3/22, 5:34 PM
Hot! Look forward to part 2. Hope one of them ends up a big strongman in a tight singlet or tights with no hair, just big gleaming smooth muscles!
6/3/22, 6:00 AM
It was sort of difficult to follow the size proportions of this transformation, but the premise was totally good!
6/2/22, 11:15 PM
Great story but I swear have read it somewhere before.
6/2/22, 10:08 PM
Anxiously awaiting the next part!
6/1/22, 8:13 AM
Try to fight it Damn this is hot
5/31/22, 5:48 PM
I have read this twice and it gets better each time. As i eead, im thinking of guys i know who fit Ev's situation and what they could be doing when not "playing" straight. i do wish there was more cause the potential possibilities are endless. Love it!