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8/29/25, 1:52 AM
Hot story I liked everything including the length of the story and the text itself with the plot. I hope to see more stories from you in the future)

9/6/25, 11:23 PM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Glad you liked it. I'll post something new soon
9/6/25, 5:33 PM
Is there anywhere i can read the rest?
Anonymous
9/6/25, 4:14 PM
Loved this can't wait for more!! Lance really helps his friends in his own way
9/6/25, 5:57 AM
Almost a full year was quite a while to wait. But on the positive side, it caused me to have to go back and reread the previous chapters to remind myself of where we were when things left off. Thank you for coming back to the story.

9/6/25, 3:02 PM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) For one of my fanfics the time between chapters was almost 3 years so 1 year isn't bad. I hope you enjoyed rereading the story and I do plan on finishing it. It's just not going to be overnight.
9/6/25, 6:01 AM
Great start!
Anonymous
9/6/25, 5:17 AM
Hope for more soon this was awsome_(inserted text here)_
Anonymous
9/6/25, 1:19 AM
Lance is such a good boy!
9/5/25, 4:42 PM
Very well written (as usual)! Please continue this story!!!
Jul 26, 2025
9/5/25, 6:15 AM
Wow this is great! So hot and leaves you wanting more, love to see more or other stories set in the same universe, how did Eli do it magic, science? Are there others out there that can shrink you to a nub just by fucking you. It’s very interesting and I really hope you explore this more just because I’m greedy, but even if this is a one shot it excellent work. The only thing that confused me, it went from part 1 to part 3?
9/4/25, 6:46 PM
Definitely a good chapter! Plenty of hot dominance over submissive boys. Yates is a good Master; looking after what's his. And I'm really interest in how these four address each other in the morning. Will Yates be a Sir or Master? Will the lads be called? From the chapter it seems boy and sub are off the table. Will he actually go for slave? Will he actually collar them? How will their livelihoods change with this new dynamic? Plus there is Sanders and all the questions around him. I really appreciate it when a story leaves questions like this!

9/5/25, 3:01 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) yes, I like that Yates himself isn't kinky naturally but is clearly a natural dom. But given he knows little to knowing about kinky stuff it so words like master, sir, boy, or sub don't take on the same meaning for him as they do for Max and Trent. And just how this changes their lives will be a focus over the next few chapters both impacted by his being military but also them being in college and kinky. And yes Sanders, and the rest of Yates team, are very open ended. Erame has plans but Yates won't just sit by. I hope to answer all the questions before I'm done but it will take a few chapters, I don't want to rush it so I'm very glad you enjoyed the story.