Curated List

Specific Vivid Sensory Detail

Curator: Evan14

last change on December 22, 2023

These are stories with a fine sense of specific, vivid sensory detail which brings them to life. There may also be excellent examples of "show, don't tell."
This story is very descriptive of the intimate parts of a guy's body and the act of bringing him to edge of orgasm. This is a great sample of writing that describes sexual tension and intimate details of masculine sexual organs.
The descriptiveness that appeals to the senses and the tension in the story are fine examples of good writing. The danger in the story is palpable.
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Tayeb, my young Arab banker is subjected to hypnosis and will reveal himself shamelessly for the greatest pleasure of my eyes.
The description of what it feels like to have a guy cum in your mouth is vivid. I also like the premise of seducing a straight guy. However, the story lacks any real sense of resistance, uncertainty, or tension.
I love the mind control aspect and the fact that the man's step-son is a brown-skinned Indian whom he hypnotizes to be a boi where. Almost like he's pimping the boy out for other white men to enjoy. Also, the involuntary discovery of pleasure is always a real turn-on.
This is a highly erotic story of racial conquest. The narrative arc moves the central character from conqueror to slave-warrior through anal insemination. It is an arousing account of transformation through sexual domination.
The story of the conquest of the Americas as it has never been told: a war between fire weapons versus ancestral magic and mind-control.
Thoroughly arousing story. It subverts two rigid narratives about identity as it touches on the taboo subject of racial themes along with the permeable boundaries of straight and gay identities.
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Two college roommates wake suddenly to find themselves in an odd new position. One to which they quickly accustom themselves.
Great story progression as Luke gradually becomes more corrupted by his entanglement with Frank. Great use of contrasts to show how thoroughly Frank conquered Luke. The contrast between Luke’s and Frank’s bodies is expertly done along with the contrast between Luke’s humiliation and arousal.
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Luke learns that being drop dead gorgeous isn't enough to make it big in the modeling industry, and the only way to do so is to make the right connections. But what will he do when climbing to the top means laying under a grotesque old man? Will he give up or will he give in?
I love the conflict of wanting to support his friend, yet being aroused by his friend's humiliation. I also love the description as the officer strokes his hapless victim's cock, inducing him to cum despite his efforts to restrain himself.
Chase wanted to be a good friend, he wanted to listen. To be there for Tom...to reassure him, but after hearing his twisted tale, along with the fate of his young, horny boy-cock... well, one thing leads to another...Chase just can't hide the horny boy-slut that he is. big mistake.