Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/14/19, 5:49 AM
man im loving this. please continue!!!
The Author
8/12/19, 9:11 PM
This story was an experiment and I completely agree that a longer length would have been 'too much'. Someone posted that they would like to see a story from a tops POV rather than the more common bottom-focus. I pondered this and then started thinking about minimalism and how many of my stories, as do others, go in to way more detail than they should, taking too much imagination away from the reader. So I decided to leave most of it up to the reader, including the dialog! Sort of like the Peanuts comic strips and movies where you never hear what the adults say. I also wanted the Oh Henry! twist and thought of an interrogation, so even like it seems as if is going there, it is not at all a snuff story. Hypnosis gave the perfect way for the top to implant the whole notion of a death to be investigated, but we all know the detective wanted it. Thanks for the comments.
8/12/19, 5:17 AM
Oh. Wow. How very interesting. The whole "there is a dead bottom" as the initial premise being through out the window soon into the story was quite interesting. As is the whole setup of the master using the lie as a means of attracting the cop to his house, after hypnotizing him at bar the night before. So yeah very nice. I also love the bit of rimming, nice touch. Very fun. The method of writing - where we see only one side of the conversation - is an interesting one. It works for this sort of thing though I figure it might not last for a longer story. Still, nice work with an interesting theme. :)
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
8/4/19, 5:36 AM
Ha! That's exactly how I was taught to suck cock properly -- using a dildo while watching porn, doing what I saw on the screen!
tiny tim
7/28/19, 8:26 PM
liked part 5 the best so far..the stuff at work. Even though the 'slave' is generally aware of what's going I really enjoyed the subliminal stuff, like when he sits on the toilet & calls his co worker 'sir' without thinking... I hope his unconscious behavior continues to develop at work, until it's just 'second-nature' to him !
abrobdl@gmail.com
7/27/19, 10:23 PM
Yes this story is on Nifty.
Anonymous
7/27/19, 9:53 PM
[Yeah it is completed on nifty](https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/authoritarian/i-hate-my-master/)
Anonymous
7/27/19, 9:53 AM
Isn't this story completed on nifty?
maxrpotter@gmail.com
7/27/19, 1:06 AM
M. Greene: that was an error, and I've submitted an edit to remove it. I left the race open, think of it as you will.
Anonymous
7/26/19, 9:05 PM
Being used as an object or a toy is not my thing.