Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/30/20, 11:25 AM
Love it. I hope he gets clothes he will hate.
Your soldier
1/8/20, 11:35 AM
great chapter i cannot wait for more!
Author
12/22/19, 6:25 PM
Well, perhaps 'clickbaiting' was too strong a term. Feel free to remove if desired. My intent was to enhance the surprise twist of the story, but I see your point.
12/18/19, 5:17 AM
Clickbaiting is not what the tags are for. Its fine as a hint in synopsis but as an actual tag, no, I think its wrong.
AgingAthlete
12/18/19, 3:31 AM
Thanks for the comments. Snuff: well, I did a bit of clickbaiting here. I frankly don't like snuff stories as they take things a bit too far for my tastes. That said, I liked the idea of *toying* with the concept, which is what this is. Apologies to anyone hoping for a death. That said, now I am thinking of an actual snuff story where the snuffed sub comes back as a very angry, and powerful, ghost top. How does that sound? Short: I was working towards a sort of 'O. Henry' kind of thing: short, sweet and surprising. Also, I thought the hidden dialog (see original story) might get tedious for the reader if it went too long.
12/18/19, 2:49 AM
I really love the idea and format of the story here, but I feel like it could be just a hair longer. Maybe there could be more hints to that "snuff" situation past of the suspect's refutal, or maybe there could be a more detailed sex scene near the end. Granted, the latter would be harder considering that you're only using dialogue to propel the story, but check out Wesley Bracken's "Letters from Prison" to see how he does it. Again, this is an awesome idea, and I hope you keep running with it!
12/17/19, 4:11 AM
Also nobody dies so why is Snuff included. It seems like a false tag.
12/17/19, 3:10 AM
Good update. I still like the trick on things.
_Rinaldo
12/15/19, 7:33 AM
Oh man, I love Mr. Pee Pee. Just picturing a big hunky stud forced to wiggle his prick around like a puppet - oh man, I hope I live to see that for real. I'd love to see Marky forced into more demeaning outfits. Something tells me he's going to really hate dressing up all girly. I think a Tinkerbell getup would look rather good.
Anonymous
12/10/19, 8:48 PM
loved this story, absolutely fantastic, altho every time i heard the name richard evans i couldn't help but think of rich evans from redlettermedia lol