Recent Comments

1/20/24, 7:04 AM
This is one of the best series currently available and it's incredible how quickly things escalate without sounding rushed. This is a demonstration of good writing. I'm very interested in learning about the character development and worldbuilding of this series, how magic works in this world, I find it all very interesting, not just the sexual part. This proves how interesting everything is being done, it makes me think about how things will be in five chapters, for example, and not just in the next one. Anyway, I really like everything I'm reading.
1/20/24, 5:53 AM
Hi. Just wanna say I don't think I can release the next chapter this Sunday. I'm apparently having a writer's block. I'll write when inspiration strikes. :satisfied:
1/20/24, 4:55 AM
Didn't expect to see the next leg of the story so soon, but enjoyed seeing the relationship between Jake and Simon grow further. Like @Fred W. Kong said, the balance between the erotic and romantic parts of this story is really enjoyable and makes the whole story enjoyable. I am really looking forward to seeing how the Neurolink will change the dynamic between Jake and SImon as well as how Jake's friends will be brought into the mix. This sotry has me thinking about the D/s relationship and how the emotional side of the master/slave realtionship can interact.
1/20/24, 12:25 AM
Made my day today.
1/19/24, 10:48 PM
You could have saved this concept and sold it to an erotica publisher. Like, conventional publishing. They do plenty of mc. (I mean this as possibly one of the greatest compliments I can give) You do an incredible job of balancing the erotic and romantic elements of this story. Even when sex isn't happening, I'm enjoying the characters and how they move around each other. Listening to Jake's internal monologue really adds a ton to the sex scenes, and his introduction to D/s and kink play feels very, very realistic. This story is already one of the greats, Simon and Jake are going to be living in my head for a long time coming.
Martin
1/19/24, 10:26 PM
Love it! Nothing better than to cum your brains out...
1/19/24, 5:25 PM
I looove this story. Too few stories are from the point of view of a cocky muscular alpha. Please continue for as long as you want!

1/19/24, 6:58 PM
@[Floridaboi](/user/show/10001705) Thanks buddy. More chapters to come.
CockSucker
1/19/24, 1:50 PM
More! More! Holly fuck! I don’t know what turned me on more, fucking the gym bunny or the faggot. Unbelievably hot writing. Fuck if you don’t understand how to fuck women and men. Woof! Keep going!

1/19/24, 6:57 PM
@CockSucker Thanks man! Glad you enjoyed it.
jerome
1/18/24, 9:45 PM
Hot beginning. When can we reed a second part.

1/19/24, 6:11 PM
@jerome Thanks man! Wasn't sure if their was a demand for a new part. Glad you enjoyed! Something to keep in mind!