Recent Comments

M
7/2/20, 1:29 AM
I'm glad that you decided to finish this story. The ending is awesome! Thanks for your hard work. I cant wait to see what you come up with next.
giveintothemusk
7/1/20, 4:49 PM
Sensational as always
7/1/20, 1:31 PM
I wanna pledge
7/1/20, 4:10 AM
Always a pleasure to read what you write. I never mind waiting because the quality is always there. You're an amazing writer ^.^
Slave Abdamelek
6/30/20, 10:56 PM
David S: Thank you so much for following this, and for your feedback. Rest assured that it is building up to something, and maybe you'll smile that you didn't see one or two of the twists coming ;)
6/30/20, 10:27 PM
I love the plot, the ideas, the writing... and I love a good prolonged story! But be careful prolonging one plot point too long. To be honest, the plot climax I hope you are building is elusive to me at the moment. As in, I'm not sure what you're building up to anymore. Maybe I need to go back and read the whole thing again... Or maybe you're doing that intentionally... And if you are doing it intentionally, you damn well better not suddenly end this with "and then they all died and everything was fine." :-)
6/28/20, 8:28 PM
BIG fan of these kinds of stories. Always love Wishes Fulfilled by the NCMC readers...gives me similar vibes and VERY excited to see what the Frat Daddy ends up doing to his boys!
6/28/20, 6:44 PM
This is extremely hot! My own personal kink, but I love how their girlfriends are so casually dismissed! So un-p.c., but I love the 'converting straight dudes' part of gay MC and wish there was more focus in stories on making them give up girls. A hazing/initiation for the other guys should naturally be something coming up, I would hope.
Anonymous
6/28/20, 3:15 PM
Love the premise. Wouldn't mind seeing some unpleasant urinal service worked into the story if it jives with where you're taking things :)
6/28/20, 11:24 AM
My target is around 2000 words per chunk of the story, so they're going to be a little quicker than I usually write.