Recent Comments

6/8/20, 8:56 PM
Really enjoyed this and hope you'll continue! I agree about the proofreading! Also, pacing-wise, some of the story goes really fast (the beginning and ending especially -- you hit your stride in the middle). I'm curious about the terms of this little contract and how being taken by an incubus might change the main character.
6/8/20, 4:09 PM
@robbotg99x4you and @Martin -- thanks so much for your comments! It's definitely good to know that the Machine is having its desired effect on you ;). It's really encouraging to hear from you!
Berlinbeefysub
6/8/20, 1:13 PM
loved it! wish i were on the place of the kid. hope there's more to come!
Martin
6/8/20, 6:46 AM
I had bookmarked this story for way too long... Just got around to read it, and fuck, is this hot! Now I've got a rock hard boner and probably can't help but to continue to read. I wished I could experience something like this for real.
6/7/20, 7:19 PM
Ha, the machine is working him, leaning as it trains. very nice. Looking for next part.
6/7/20, 7:06 PM
Great start. I have been hypnotized. Sometimes, for me your floating in and out of Consciousness, like in light sleep. You got it. Hard to not to be aroused and wake. Love it more.
6/7/20, 6:45 PM
Yes, This is what robots, like me need, to be condistioned , programed. thank you, more please.
6/7/20, 2:51 AM
Something you alluded to in the middle of the story with just a simple sentence...I would be interested to see if The Machine was building up slaves loyal to it and only obedient to their masters on the surface. But then again, I'm a robot dude so of course I would love to see these subjects being made to be robotic unaware until it's too late and then embrace the robot.
6/6/20, 7:21 PM
@MuscleSon69 Thanks for all your comments on this chapter and on the others! I'm definitely planning on more -- what kinds of things would you like to see happen next?
MuscleSon69
6/6/20, 4:34 PM
Wow!!! Any more forthcoming?