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Anonymous
6/4/20, 7:23 PM
more please. always live a submissive cop
6/4/20, 7:34 AM
i really hope you continue this series. its so detailed and fascinating!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/4/20, 2:46 AM
Certainly my favorite elements going on. Wish I was in that position some day.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/2/20, 10:07 PM
Nothing came in so far. Can you please resend it?
6/1/20, 1:17 AM
The violence was requested by the commissioner, but I'm not opposed to gore myself--I just tend to avoid it since most folks don't like it. I'd always rather write something that sticks with you, rather than something you feel like you've already seen before!
5/31/20, 12:05 PM
Thanks for this story! I first read the uncensored version and then this version, and I like this version significantly more. I find all the violence and gore a distraction from the narrative. Although violence for its own sake is not my thing, I can definitely understand how it can be a turn on. As I commented at the end of chapter 1, I love the idea of a guy discovering he's a demon and trying to wrestle and understand himself and his urges. But then that aspect of the story gets replaced by a demon trying but unable to satisfy himself - it's like it starts one way and then morphs into another story. In other words, it seems like two different stories spliced together. Your uncensored version has a kind of repeating ending (much more than here) which was very atmospherically haunting, reminding me of the 1946 film "Dead of Night." I suppose you wanted to leave the reader in a mood like Hugh, always wanting more but never achieving it. I wonder if you might consider creating a different Hugh story where it's established from the outset that he's a twisted demon, but then tries to search for more and actually finds it. (Personally I would like to play around with the notion of a guy discovering and coming to grips with being a demon - I think that's probably too tame for your taste.) Again thanks for this story - I won't say it's my favorite, but it really makes a strong impression and sticks in the mind.
Anonymous
5/29/20, 3:06 PM
@Hunter check you mail 😉
Jonanator
5/27/20, 10:24 PM
it was amazing. you should continue it. it's a hot story.
Anonymous
5/27/20, 7:40 PM
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/27/20, 6:04 PM
I wish I could find somebody like this to blackmail me, lucky kid.