Recent Comments

7/12/20, 6:47 AM
Okay, okay, i am definitely coming around to your way of thinking, and honestly i feel pretty mindfucked because at this point i can't imaging having anything negative to say about this incredibly hot story. Thanks for your erotic imagination, great writing, and sharing them with the rest of us. Damned if i'm not going to go to bed tonight thinking about getting spit-roasted by the Collelo twins, Julian's devil smirk, and that incessant feeling that i need to call Julian or LestatD, my Master. Good job! You're definitely a Master.
7/12/20, 6:25 AM
i love the idea of submitting to slave hypnosis and being totally dominated like this, so this hits a lot of my hot buttons. i am particularly aroused when someone younger manages to dominate someone older. However, i am really confused as to how Julian managed to get this level of hypnotic control over Tom. When and how did he manage to program Tom with hypnotic triggers? Tom's initially falling asleep during the workout didn't make sense to me. There was no mention of any prior hypnosis. i understand that Julian has a hot young man's body with a commanding demeanor, a big cock, mind-bending pheromones, and a bottle of poppers, but according to the story Tom is straight and has a good and developing relationship with Julian's mother. i don't see how this would realistically happen. i know it's just a story, and as readers we can choose to just overlook a few loose ends. That's what allows me to enjoy the rest of the story so much. i just wish the missing pieces had been filled in. For me that would have made for a fantastic story i would have bookmarked and read over and over. (Actually i may do that yet, but will wait and see how things develop further.)
Anonymous
7/11/20, 12:09 AM
Great story. I hope there is more to come in the future!
giveintothemusk
7/10/20, 7:21 AM
Musk! My favourite . Can't wait til he spends a bit more time in daddy's pit.
7/10/20, 6:30 AM
Another little gem of writing. The only thing that would make it better is a description of exactly how the odors smell.
Martin
7/9/20, 8:50 PM
"pure boy-musk" huh? Fuck, yeah!
Martin
7/9/20, 8:27 PM
Oh I can almost smell that hot teen musk and sweat....
Anonymous
7/8/20, 11:00 AM
Amazing story! PS. are the Collelo twins a tribute to Oliverclaudiusdarcy? He wrote some amazing stories :)
7/8/20, 12:11 AM
Fantastic!