Recent Comments

7/12/20, 7:09 PM
Beautifully written. Highly original and clever. Reminds me a bit of the movie Were the World Mine. I wholeheartedly agree with Stroppy Author. This is indeed one of the most original and enjoyable stories I've read in a long time. I hope that we see more of you and your writing here.
7/12/20, 5:36 PM
There are more grossly and lasciviously hotter stories here, but this is, quite Sincerely and literally, the most original and enjoyable story I've read in a long time! Wonderful!!! Top marks!
7/12/20, 4:04 PM
can you do more of this?
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
7/12/20, 3:20 PM
Need an address for these apartments please!
7/12/20, 7:12 AM
Well, i have to say that i saw that one coming. It was the obvious next step for Julian to create a very powerful blackmail control over Tom. i can see that for the story's sake, it was a logical next step, but personally i don't like using blackmail as the tools for M/s control, even in a story and even when the boy has been very sexually active and freely made the choice to be involved. That said if i overlook those elements, the story is still very hot. Julian definitely has the personality and imagination to be a Master. For me it is Julian that makes this story undeniably hot! i'm pretty hooked on Julian at this point, so sincerely hope you have more chapters in the works -- more, please, Sir.
7/12/20, 6:47 AM
Okay, okay, i am definitely coming around to your way of thinking, and honestly i feel pretty mindfucked because at this point i can't imaging having anything negative to say about this incredibly hot story. Thanks for your erotic imagination, great writing, and sharing them with the rest of us. Damned if i'm not going to go to bed tonight thinking about getting spit-roasted by the Collelo twins, Julian's devil smirk, and that incessant feeling that i need to call Julian or LestatD, my Master. Good job! You're definitely a Master.
7/12/20, 6:25 AM
i love the idea of submitting to slave hypnosis and being totally dominated like this, so this hits a lot of my hot buttons. i am particularly aroused when someone younger manages to dominate someone older. However, i am really confused as to how Julian managed to get this level of hypnotic control over Tom. When and how did he manage to program Tom with hypnotic triggers? Tom's initially falling asleep during the workout didn't make sense to me. There was no mention of any prior hypnosis. i understand that Julian has a hot young man's body with a commanding demeanor, a big cock, mind-bending pheromones, and a bottle of poppers, but according to the story Tom is straight and has a good and developing relationship with Julian's mother. i don't see how this would realistically happen. i know it's just a story, and as readers we can choose to just overlook a few loose ends. That's what allows me to enjoy the rest of the story so much. i just wish the missing pieces had been filled in. For me that would have made for a fantastic story i would have bookmarked and read over and over. (Actually i may do that yet, but will wait and see how things develop further.)
Anonymous
7/11/20, 12:09 AM
Great story. I hope there is more to come in the future!
giveintothemusk
7/10/20, 7:21 AM
Musk! My favourite . Can't wait til he spends a bit more time in daddy's pit.
7/10/20, 6:30 AM
Another little gem of writing. The only thing that would make it better is a description of exactly how the odors smell.