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1/30/24, 4:02 PM
You leave me speechless. This Chapter was one I was struggling a lot. So much more I feel honored by your comment. And your comment motivates for a (few?) next chapter(s). To all readers: please write your thoughts of this "fantasy". BTW: Tomorrow you all can see, what would happen, if the descission is to contimue as "part-time slave".
Martin
1/30/24, 2:15 PM
Now I can finally comment this! This story is starting really promising. It's not hitting my kink button perfectly, but I'm still affected very much. I'm curious as for how you gonna develop this. I'd add "consensual non-consent" as a tag, as this is exactly what that tag is about. I like to read such a total power exchange story which is really consensual and not based on kidnapping or any other kind of act of force.
1/30/24, 12:30 AM
Oh my oh my oh my oh my!! Gdhdndhrfdg Do fucking good! Everything about this was amazing! So good! Great plot, great porn, great sex, great end. So good! So sexy.

Martin
1/30/24, 6:13 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I hear you. This is one amazingly hot and cum-inducing story, well written, great concept, and prefect execution!
1/30/24, 2:42 AM
@Martin, I guess you mean January 30 in European time because it's January 29 in the States and I just finished reading this leg of the story. I like this ending. It's not an overwhelming change in Dan and Taylor; it's more Inception style without the whole depression. And all three being Simon's jockboys just comes gradually. It's really nice to see a story where the mind control doesn't dominate but comes on gradually and there is an acceptance of the control. And you left room for the story to go in different directions. Thank you for writing this story.

Martin
1/30/24, 6:12 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) The intricacies of time zones :) The system always shows a timestamp adjusted for your local time zone. So I'm always talking MET :)
1/30/24, 4:56 AM
4 stars
1/30/24, 4:14 AM
Great finale! You're right in your comment to Martin: this ending is pretty clearly signposted, but no less hot for it! The fact that all the jockboys end up being a hivemind at the end is very sexy, and you do a great job showing them absorb Jake's personality during the orgy scene. Too bad I don't know any hot nerds who can mindfuck me into submission.
1/30/24, 2:22 AM
The ending was even better than I dreamed. Glad the time zones allowed this to appear Monday night instead of Tuesday. Yay! And why isn’t this in the running for Mad Science?

1/30/24, 3:34 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I thought about putting this in mad science, but really only the last chapter fits with the contest, imho. And I started posting the story before the contest started. I don’t think you can put a later chapter of a story in a contest, since it wouldn’t be fair for the anonymous judging. Think of this as your Mad Science appetizer before the contest. 😃

1/30/24, 4:04 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Yeah, I get it. But this is one hell of an appetizer ! Just about the best series I’ve read here in a long time.
EJG
1/29/24, 1:41 PM
Damn, this was one of the hottest stories i've read in a long while,even with the str8 sex all element. I am a sucker for CNC,bad boys and dominant bullies, and it's just about damned time we get a BIG TOP/small sub rather than the token sbig sub tags i tend to see. Claudio seemed to even have a hypnotic aura about his dominance,even though it was not a hypno theme. Ya got me privately fantasizing about Claudio inviting his boys round to 'spear the queer' or even the other scenario's with other dom jocks poor Dylan found himself in

1/30/24, 1:04 AM
@[EJG](/user/show/1050471) Thank you for the kind words! I love to walk the line between reality/supernatural in my stories, so the reader themself can make their own conclusions of whether or not it was Claudio's mere presence that did Dylan in, or there was something more in the works. > Ya got me privately fantasizing about Claudio inviting his boys round to ‘spear the queer’ or even the other scenario’s with other dom jocks poor Dylan found himself in Oh, believe me, you are _not_ alone! :wink:
1/30/24, 12:37 AM
This was truly incredible.
1/29/24, 7:23 PM
Big Budd was looking for one of the ranch hands for relief. Made me wander if the ranch hands are only given one or two doses not the full treatment. Thought about an indentured servant. To pay for the full treatment that they can't afford they have to "work it off" so to speak. With the prologue none of the new cast were told the cost of the treatment. Could be a 'here the first one is free...'

1/29/24, 9:48 PM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) The Littleman's stuff has never really given me that sinister vibe before. Certainly not in the sense of offering "free samples" to lure guys in and not disclose the full gravity of the situation, or to "indenture" guys. Absman has already written plenty about indentured men, recently...

1/29/24, 10:56 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) @[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) I, also, don't think there's anything sinister going on (other than they want to take over the world, right?). I mean, there might be financing available for the procedure, but that wouldn't be the Budd Brothers -- that'd be the home office. My take on the ranch hands is they're guys who've gone through the Littleman's Procedure, but couldn't/ didn't want to re-enter "real life" -- we'll see several cameos through the course of this story from the 1st, but they largely don't matter to the plot.