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blankbot
12/10/20, 8:27 PM
Nicely done.
12/10/20, 7:54 PM
I liked this a lot! Love the septum piercing!
12/10/20, 4:47 PM
Great start! Looking forward to more. I hope Charlie grows more comfortable with his new situation.
Anonymous
12/10/20, 3:43 PM
excellent work!!
12/10/20, 3:36 PM
Thanks boi98229! I appreciate the feedback. Glad you enjoyed!
12/10/20, 5:53 AM
I love the super-techie (almost magic!) toys you thought up. This is the kind of imagination i wish for every Dom, along with the fun times experimenting and the appreciative subs to help with the test runs. i did find that with everything going on (so much action) the story flashed by pretty quick with some sense of suspense, a good intellectual sense of the toys and their potential use, but rather lacking (for my typical taste at least) in erotic tension. i missed (what i typically most enjoy in a BDSM D/s story) is the slow process of seduction and shift in control. It felt a little like a Batman-Joker battle in Willie Wonka's Chocolate Factory -- a fun read! Thanks so much for sharing with us.
12/10/20, 5:18 AM
i tend to over-think things sometimes, and right now i am really worried about what happens to Charlie if he expands while bottled up in a glass jar. That can't be good!
12/10/20, 4:41 AM
Tysm Evan! Thank you for reading!
Evan
12/10/20, 3:58 AM
Great series! Thank you for writing!
12/9/20, 7:52 PM
Thanks Jon! Glad you've enjoyed the series :)