It's continuing. Just ran into a few technical glitches. Within a day or two, I think I'll be posting the next chapter. Thanks for your comment. -- DikThik

If you don't continue the story I will be really disappointed

I adored this in every way, and the only thing that I wish were different is that I wish it were a *novel.* Your use of language is beautiful, and your pacing excellent, as are pretty much all your writerly skills in this piece. The way you describe the fae creatures of the world you've created perfectly combines hot with unnerving, and realistic with fantastical. It was all *lovely,* all visual and whimsical and deeply arousing in such a fantastic way! I want to comment a bit on my favorite thing you do here, which is the way you use language, speech, words, and meter as both a literary and narrative tool. I know you didn't exactly *invent* the lore that, in the Faerie realm, words have more power or significance, but you execute it *brilliantly.* From the way different varieties of character speak differently to the magic-laced words that lure Chance into a spell, to the little bits of linguistic play, like "happen-Chance"... Possibly my favorite part of the whole thing is how the climax is essentially a battle of wit and a battle of words, turning the usual Fae trickery on its head as Fairchilde plays this kind of linguistic game with Robin. It was lovely!! Both entertaining and gripping, which is hard to do when you haven't *explicitly* set up the exact rules of what power words seem to have in this world. I may be off base with my reading there, but it's something which stood out to me and brought me a lot of joy as I read. I do wish we got to see more of how Chance behaved with Fairchilde afterwards, and what the lasting mark of the fair folk did to him in his everyday life, but you've built a rich enough world and characters that I feel well-equipped to imagine for myself. I could go on and on about this for a pretty long time, and comment on all the individual lines and pieces of worldbuilding which brought a smile to my face or a, uh, different kind of excitement to *other* notable parts of me (lol), but... suffice to say, I loved it.

Having something like F9 whisper in one's ear so sweetly while the rest of the earth goes a little strange seems like one of the sweetest forms of apocalypse. I liked the blending of genres that occurs in the interrogation room - *especially* the wallet aspect, which wraps up that open question so neatly - along with, well, every other aspect of this. Super job!

What I like about this chapter is we finally get a little -- is it mind control? -- bit of Charlie rationalizing his changing behavior and feelings. Took him long enough...

Keep going,, i am also the one who like this fetish,, i really enjoy your story.

I really like it. Please, continue with more sex submission.

getting better and better!!

Very hot! Thanks so much! i am looking forward to reading how Charlie can be completely convinced he is now one of Phillipe's boys.

Damn this is hot! Can't wait to see where this is going