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1/21/21, 1:27 PM
Thanks, Hypnothrill, for the observations. I can see where you're coming from. I decided not to go that way, feeling I'd get too involved in the weeds, as it were, at the expense of the story.
1/21/21, 12:55 PM
@Horn Thank you so much! I really appreciate this comment :D
1/21/21, 12:55 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I will have to keep that in mind. We'll see.
1/21/21, 10:23 AM
love it! you're ideas are great and excellent writing! not only a hot concept, but the story itself is well written
Anonymous
1/21/21, 8:03 AM
I love this!!! Hope you do a puppy/animal play episode!!
1/21/21, 7:38 AM
Great premise, and I love the pictures. However, I wonder if it's trying to compress too much time into a single 5000-word chapter. We get these massive time jumps, and after each one, the narrator speaks in general terms about what's been happening to him. So the story feels less immediate than it might otherwise. Also, although the narrator tells us repeatedly that he's a devout Christian, we don't see that playing out very much in his interaction with the natives or in his struggles with his mental transformation. Just a matter of personal taste, but for me the story would have worked better if we saw the narrator being very judgmental and preachy before his abduction.
1/18/21, 6:07 AM
please please please more!!!!
1/17/21, 9:55 PM
You serie was super hot ! made me cum many times !
1/15/21, 8:09 PM
@Jjoday018 Thank you so much for your comment man! Glad you liked! I can't wait to bring you the next twisted chapter 😉
1/15/21, 7:26 PM
i freaking love this!!! i cant wait for the next twisted chapter!!