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9/14/21, 11:38 PM
i wonder what the possible effects of eli having heard Erik's trigger phrase might be? sure he has only heard it once, and he has no idea what it could do, but what kinds of trouble could a smart, vindictive, jealous, middle sibling do with his elder brother's trigger before Vince finds out? just a thought.

9/18/21, 2:06 AM
@Mind Labyrinth, what a great thought that is! I'll say this definitely got the creative juices flowing ;)

9/18/21, 8:55 AM
@Blackjinx123 *Squealing and clapping* What a wonderful thing to hear that i inspired such a talented storyteller!
mcdermottr13@gmail.com
9/14/21, 5:31 AM
Never ceases to amaze me, your story is getting better and better. I find myself sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter. Please, please keep this story going.

9/18/21, 2:05 AM
@mcdermottr13@gmail.com, wow! What a compliment! And don't worry, I'm absolutely going to keep going. Writing this story has been so much fun and hearing how much people enjoy my writing is inspirational. I'm so happy you've enjoyed the story thus far!
Elm
9/13/21, 11:25 PM
YES!! That about sums up my reaction when I read this story. Another great entry! I was a bit off with my prediction last time haha, but the uncle is fun too! cant wait to see what happens.

9/18/21, 2:01 AM
@Elm, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It always makes my day to see that people who have been reading since the beginning are still around, so thanks for sticking around! :)
9/13/21, 10:17 PM
PLEASE I need to know what happens with Erik...love a cop in uniform!!

9/18/21, 1:54 AM
@uniformeddandy, no worries! Erik's punishment is already mapped out, and waiting to be written. Your patience will be rewarded! ;)
9/13/21, 2:36 PM
dont you dare stop this series! youre a brilliant author! thank you for your wonderful stories!

9/18/21, 1:50 AM
@Erratic101, no plans on stopping anytime soon, even if i take breaks here and there I'll always come back. thank you so much for the compliments and the motivation boost, they mean so much! :)
9/13/21, 12:36 PM
wow it is getting better and better man, very nice. i love it

9/18/21, 1:47 AM
@TimDrake22, thank you so much for the support!
9/13/21, 12:18 PM
Such a great story. Building up what will happen with his siblings. My special interest goes to what will happen to Erik. What did he see at the hardcore homo porn? Hope for his new outfits there was a scene he thinks he has to choose for an orange prison overall. He should get a lot of tattoos before he is allowed to wear it An extra will be if he asks Hank for a transport restraint belt. Will it be a cop or some thugs he met at the tattooshop when he got his first tattoos earlier in the week, to transport him to get a special humiliation?

9/18/21, 1:47 AM
@uniform53, I'm happy your enjoying the story so far! Erik does seem to be a favorite on here, thanks for the suggestions.
9/13/21, 8:21 AM
OH.MY! I love myself a good daddy in a suit so I totally get Vince here. And now his uncle,too? This will be fun. Can't wait. For the brothers,too. That little game with Erik Was awesome already,can't wait to see what you do to him in uniform

9/18/21, 1:37 AM
@ForgottenCradle, I'm the same with my love of uniforms and suits, I drool everywhere! Mac is certainly going to be an interesting addition to the household ;)
Horn
9/18/21, 12:51 AM
this is kinda getting repetitive wont lie