Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/19/22, 8:09 AM
where does it say he enslaved the security guard? did i miss a part? i thought he was just being nice, buying him some food
3/19/22, 7:13 AM
this is getting more and more interesting. The more the control, the hotter this story gets. Slavery and obedience really complements each other. Keep this hot streak going! More toying with the toy!
3/19/22, 5:30 AM
i loved how Jack enslaved all his security guard
Anonymous
3/19/22, 12:05 AM
Damn! What a hot story! Great beginning to what could really be a series! For example, Gulliver could tweak their hormones to have them fulfill certain roles. One guy is forced to build his ass and pecs, and his nipples start lactating. another guy's dick and balls are grown to pornographic proportions. He could even change the hormones so that it deprived the brain of nutrients, to make someone dumber and more subservient!

3/19/22, 12:46 AM
@ I hadn't conceived this as a series, but I absolutely agree that it has all kinds of potential.
3/18/22, 11:40 PM
loved it!
3/18/22, 11:36 PM
For a moment I thought Joe would say that he also enslaved the security guards! lol
3/18/22, 2:22 PM
Super hot concept!
3/18/22, 9:18 AM
Damn, this was so hot. Great twists, loved when William and Jonas were discussing how they'd hypnotised Perry in their owns ways while he wasn't there. He really is an owned pup! Loooooved the pup play, so exciting. I can't wait to see Perry become more of a pup if you decide to continue the story. The writing, set up, characters, and pacing were all incredibly well done. Amazing work, hats off! Can't wait to see what you do next, you're a very talented writer and have a creative mind. Thanks!

3/18/22, 12:50 PM
@Henry Wolf thank you so much for enjoying this story and for leaving such a wonderfully detailed comment!
3/18/22, 12:12 PM
Very Hot! Love the manipulation of this dumb jock. Since the doctor just showed him the only way he can cum is by pressure on his prostate, maybe sends him home with a special prostate applicator (dildo) to use each time he's horny...like daily when he smells his team mates in the locker room. gets caught in the stall riding the thick dong - photos and videos of him spread
Mar 31, 2019
Martin
3/17/22, 10:50 PM
Added to Collar... it seemed only suitable. Also very hot story!

Lotus-Silk
3/18/22, 4:47 AM
@Martin Aww, thank you so much for doing that! And thank you everyone for the thoughtful comments!