Recent Comments

5/1/22, 7:08 AM
Nobody does it like the Parker Bros!
Archie
4/30/22, 5:31 PM
Insaaaanely hot! Love seeing the Parker Brothers making an appearance outside of their stories!
4/30/22, 3:11 PM
Sammy and the bros!!! Nice!!
John
4/30/22, 3:29 AM
Unbelievably hot and and excellent story!!!!
4/29/22, 5:58 PM
A good slave in the making. I hope he stays in that latex as his training continues. It will be exciting to read how the coach plans on making his position permanent.
Cracker
4/29/22, 4:08 PM
Fucking blew my brain and another organ too😉
4/29/22, 12:46 PM
That was hotter than the sun.

4/29/22, 1:13 PM
@Beaner Thanks man, it's nice to know someone is reading :)
4/29/22, 9:25 AM
Thank you all for the super positive feedback!! It really makes my day and encourages me to keep writing💜
toy #4
4/29/22, 7:42 AM
You have consistently great stories. it is exciting to see your name come up.
Rubber_Lover14
4/29/22, 1:41 AM
This is one of the best transformation stories I've ever read! The musk, the milking, forcing the officer to drink his chiefs muscletit milk. It was all amazing. I wonder if the doctor has done this to others outside the officers. Who was their first victim? Who will be their next victim? What other transformations is he capable of performing? Honestly, this story is amazing, and I would not be mad at seeing a continuation, spin off, or prequel. Like what about the chief? Was he a willing participant, or was he tricked into it? Seeing as this was written months ago, I doubt anything will come of this comment in terms of new stories, but I just wanted to share how truly amazing it was. Such a huge turn on. Male lactation and intense milking has always been a link of mine, but I've rarely seen stories that truly do it justice. And this is one of them. I'll totally be revisiting this story at some point to reread. For research purposes of course 👀

4/29/22, 1:47 AM
@Rubber_Lover14 Thanks for the lovely comment! I'm glad you enjoyed this story, and yes I do plan to continue it at some point. The second part was slow to follow the first and because of that I made it a point to give it a reasonable ending while leaving it open for future chapters so that readers wouldn't feel cliff-hung. I'm currently on an erotic writing hiatus while focus on stuff for my job that requires me to do a fair amount of writing outside of work, but I haven't quit writing and will get back to this enjoyable pastime as soon as I can.

Rubber_Lover14
4/29/22, 1:57 AM
@amul Ah, fair enough. Work comes first after all ^^. I can totally see why your taking a hiatus. If you already write alot for work and stuff, then also doing writing for GSS could give you burn out or writer's block, which is the worst. I've had times where I've written too much and then just been unable to write for weeks. So yeah, take as much time as u need for your Hiatus. Just gives us plenty of time to speculate on all the kinky outcomes this storyline could have 🤤 Anyways, I hope you have a nice day ^^ and I hope your not working yourself too hard with work. Burn out is the worst and I'd hate to see u suffer from it. I've experienced it and it was not fun. Anywho, have a nice day ^^