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4/19/22, 7:38 AM
I can’t believe I had no idea about this story! I loved it from beginning to end, last chapter and this one. It’s so _wholesome_. What’s hilarious and wonderful to me is that Jon does think Theo is hot, but either doesn’t connect it to their frequent, extremely dirty fucking, or does and just plays the role for fun. At the same time, there does seem to be something pheromonic about these hot jocks’ cocks. I can’t wait to find out more. (All I’d suggest is to take all that cum the jocks are producing to another level and bring in some cum inflation. A little bit of a gut in a flat stomach, brought about by a massive load of cum, is just the hottest thing… but that’s just my opinion.)

4/19/22, 12:49 PM
@Soren Fitz Just wanted to chime in and say I like a bit of bloat, too! Sexy as hell. :D
4/19/22, 12:49 PM
Welcome back! I remember falling in love with Jon the instead I started reading about him—and this just proved it more. It’s fascinating to read a story where sex is totally separated from romance and even orientation, as it were: Jon genuinely believes that all of Theo’s actions are harmless fun. It’s an odd attitude for sure, but one that’s definitely interesting to read about! Now all I need to do is find a guy like Jon in real life… :p
4/19/22, 12:37 PM
So Hot Man, Thank You!
4/19/22, 12:26 PM
Just simply fantastic.
4/19/22, 11:48 AM
Loved it! I hope that the hot dumb jock will fall on a cock too in the future
4/19/22, 10:44 AM
More, more, more! I mean, obviously *I* would say that...
3/30/22, 12:49 PM
This feels like a light novel now - the likes of Fate/Stay Night. Love the lore building! Keep it up and I hope you update soon.!

3/31/22, 6:12 AM
@Curious53 I think you may have described the vibe very aptly!

Anonymous
4/19/22, 7:02 AM
@Curious53 I would say more like tsukihime but they're both part of the nasuverse so same vibe makes sense
4/18/22, 6:44 AM
Martin iPhones always auto translate. I read all the foreign language stories although things definitely get lost in translation sometimes lol. Good job on the story!

SklaveTimm
4/18/22, 11:11 AM
@Mrdick How good or bad is the auto translated version? Is it so bad, that a regular translation is worth the work?

4/18/22, 11:23 AM
@SklaveTimm well I guess that’s hard to say since I don’t read German. But I generally understand what your trying to write.
SklaveTimm
4/18/22, 11:19 AM
Danke, danke, danke! So viel Lob, da muss ich ja aufpassen, dass ich nicht abhebe. 😁 Ich hatte über Ostern etwas mehr Zeit als üblich, weshalb einige Teile zur Geschichte hinzugefügt werden konnten. Der eigentliche Plan war mal, dass es jede Woche einen Teil geben soll. Ich hoffe das auch durchzuhalten. Das Schreiben selbst gelingt ganz gut, aber.... Je umfangreicher die Story wird, um ao öfter muss ich in den alten Teilen schauen um nicht zu viel zu wiederholen oder gar meine Charaktere zu verwechseln... Bezüglich des Hinweises von Martin, ich poste mehrmals in der Woche links zu meinen stories auf Twitter, sollte also nach und nach eine kleine Leserschaft hier her bringen.
4/18/22, 7:56 AM
Sehr geile Story.. ich denke es gibt einige deutsche Leser.. und wenn es bekannt wird das man hier deutsche Geschichten findet können das auch noch mehr werden. Bin gespannt wie es weiter geht.