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5/6/22, 6:21 PM
I'm excited for another round of this super fun story! πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

5/6/22, 11:32 PM
@NeedControlling Thanks! πŸ‘ŠπŸΌ
5/6/22, 6:39 PM
Another excellent chapter. Don't worry about the length. Your chapters should be whatever length it takes to tell the story as you want to tell it. The combination of perspectives is fun! And now that the Doc has left a text telling Markus what he is going to do to him, we get to watch Markus struggle and try to resist! The ear buds.... Did the Doc put some kind of special earbud into Markus's ears the last time he had him in the medical exam room?

5/6/22, 7:16 PM
@Muscle-Flex I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter ^^ I always get a little worried when my chapters don't do too hot. However it's great to see that some people enjoy my story. And in terms of the earbuds, will, was it the first or last doctor visit. Who's to say πŸ‘€
5/6/22, 2:49 AM
This was so hot. And a great foundation for a future story. I can't wait to see what happens next One thing I'm wondering, what will the kinky punishment be? I can see it being an ironic punishment. Like it's based in whatever punishment you lost at. However, It could also be something completely different Like what if the loosers are sold off as slaves to pay for the winner? Maybe even the runner up. Like "here's your 50'000. Unfortunately, as your now this fine gentleman's slave, it will be going to him" Idk, just what I thought of as I read. Can't wait to see where this is going. And I hope some foot fetish, socks/shoe fetish is involved at some point. That's my favourite. Or maybe being trapped in latex would be a good fetish to involve. Who knows. Your the author so we'll have to wait and see what you decide

5/6/22, 4:50 PM
@Rubber_Lover Love your comment. Tysm and glad you enjoyed! Their will definetly be various types of kinks down the line!
5/6/22, 12:33 PM
I really like the story, Being owned and made to do whatever your owners want to do and dress how you are told is so hot. Hopefully he will get some nice piercings and maybe a tattoo
5/6/22, 12:26 PM
Great story
5/6/22, 6:14 AM
Just found this and really enjoying it so far! Also, quite glad to not have to endure the CBT myself! 😬
5/6/22, 4:27 AM
Loved it! Scheduled orgies, how dreary! Loved how entangled Jack and Daniel have become that even with changes they come back together. And as Jack is the Sheriff with a harem, Jack is the Fire Chief of a gay poly commune. As always, hot and sweet at the same time. A boner and the fuzzies all in one package (?).
5/6/22, 12:28 AM
Very fun, very hot, the kind of premium tv I need. Martin and Cubster stole the show this round. How easy Martin fell was awesome. But Cubster, hot damned! From the moment he was hypno'd, best so far. Can't wait for the next episode!

5/6/22, 2:14 AM
@Essex Loved hearing your thoughts and which players you are enjoying! Can't wait to get the next episode out for you.

5/6/22, 4:04 AM
@TieMeEdgeMe Can't wait! Gotta revisit the previous "season", it's been a while.
5/5/22, 5:45 PM
You have the awe-inducing ability of writing with an almost heteronymic style - the Norismo that writes PokΓ©mon Himbo Sun could be a different person from the Norismo who wrote this. It shows just how _brilliant_ of a writer you are. The mixture of control and tenderness was done really, really well. Keep up the amazing work!

5/5/22, 11:01 PM
@Twan Andersen I hope you're looking forward to approving dozens more chapters in the dalton creek saga :grin:
5/5/22, 7:03 PM
I don't normally like dad and son stuff as much as brothers, but I did appreciate these somewhat wholesomeness that this chapter had. Wonderful work.

5/5/22, 9:17 PM
@NicoMindSlayer95, thank you so much! I’m always happy to see people enjoying my story no matter the reason. Thanks for the comment :grinning: