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7/23/22, 2:40 PM
A big bad wolf? That's right up my alley : ) I like the second-person narrative, which is kinda rare but makes the story particularly Immersive. Furry is usually not a major kink for me, but I have to adimit that spicing it with size difference and a little dom/sub dynamic really pushes my buttons. I actually expected to see things pushed a little further (kinkier) in the bad boy type part, like some scenarios where the protagonist were collared by his werewolf roomate, you know, the dog-leash-human with sheer sarcasm and hotness in it. But it ended with a more lovey-dovey style which is also a lot of fun. Thanks for the story. Looking forward to your next work!

7/23/22, 10:09 PM
@goodpuppy Yes! I was worried the second-person style might be a bit offputting for some, but now I think it was a great decision, likely something I'll return to later. There's always a shortage of second-person stories, it's a niche I want to try to fill. As for pushing things farther, I absolutely have more ideas on how deep this rabbithole can go. I mainly wanted to write an ending that seemed to satisfy both ends of the canine's personality, and also leave things open for a potential sequel. It's all just a matter of deciding on the direction their story should take. Thanks for reading! Have a great day.
7/23/22, 4:53 PM
I hope that you keep going with this. I'm really enjoying it so far and want to see where it goes.
7/22/22, 1:20 AM
This story has made me cum twice so far. Can't say for sure I wouldn't sign up to be a candidate for this experiment. Eagerly awaiting another installment. Maybe include a little more description of his balls & scrotum shrinking? There are sooooo many stories on here where guys have their cocks shrunken to the point of disappearing and then the become female; I'd love to NOT have this turn into one of those. You could have the nanobots malfunction in some way; perhaps after giving Evan a micropenis, they just sort of overload and stop? What if the nanobots got into Evan's cum and the top found himself shrinking after his next session with Evan? Lots of possibilities. Please keep the story going.

7/22/22, 3:02 AM
@SeamusTX thanks so much! I’m so glad you are enjoying it. Yes, I’m also not into feminization and want to leave them with a little something haha. I will try more to include descriptions of their balls and scrotum, I totally neglected them haha. Thanks again!
7/22/22, 11:19 PM
This is one of the hottest fucking stories I’ve read in a long time, and I can promise you I’ll come back to it over and over again, not least because of the huge werewolf dick, nor least because it does cum inflation incredibly well and that’s literally my favourite kink. And the details! The visceral details—I take pride in my detailed prose but this vividness I can only learn from. I came… way too quickly; I’ll take a few sessions to get through this baby properly, I’m sure of it. You’ve earned yourself a fast fan.

7/22/22, 11:34 PM
@Soren Fitz Hey there! Thanks for the high praise. It really means a lot. I’m one of those people who tends to be really self-critical about my work, so it means a lot to hear that I’ve got some skill. Not sure when my next stories will be coming out, but I’ll try to make them just as vivid and detailed as this one. Did you have any favorite lines or quotes, just out of curiosity?

7/22/22, 11:47 PM
@octavian I was particularly pleased by the kiss—I thought it was exceptionally visceral, and the paragraph just after that when anon’s hair spills down their forehead shows an impressive awareness of the sensory experience of your character, and it’s about that time that I said “okay, I’ve got to do a real close read and absorb some of these skills by osmosis.” I swear there was a moment when I said “okay I’ve got to steal that line” but I can’t quite catch it now. And I feel you on the self-criticality. When I first started writing for this site I was in desperate need of comments like the one I just wrote, lmao. The more you experience this kind of affirmation the easier it will become to affirm yourself. And sometimes you just go back and read when someone you respect as a fellow author or someone you trust as a good reader gives you a comment that makes you feel proud of your own work. I trust you’ll get lots of those. Did you bring this from somewhere else, or is this quite fresh as a work?

7/23/22, 12:45 AM
@Soren Fitz Believe it or not, I actually wrote this story a few months back. I didn't post it here because I didn't know if such a furry-centric piece would receive a good reception or even be allowed at all. To be honest, I had only been on Gay Spiral for years without even knowing the other sites existed until yesterday when I published my previous story. I started working on that story, Troublemaker, around the start of this month, actually. And yeah, when it came to the kiss and the other highly detailed parts, usually my methodology is to just start out writing the most bare-bones story. I have a basic outline for everything I write. Every time I return to continue the story, I start from the beginning and edit what I previously wrote. I use the momentum and the motivation from doing that to continue writing new content, and gradually I might stop adhering to the outline as much and come up with something hotter on the fly. So usually it might start out as a basic "He kissed me" but then it gradually evolves into what you read. Then it all gets edited, cleaned up, and once the story is done I send it to friends for their thoughts.

7/23/22, 9:16 AM
Yeah, we’re really trying to work on getting people interested in Kinky (and to a lesser extent the other sites). Glad to see you join the fray. I appreciate that method of writing a lot. It’s a hard-earned skill to just… skip a line and tell yourself you’ll write it later. It goes against my own impulses, but it’s very valuable at times. Funny enough, the extent to which I entwine sex and plot/character/emotional development sometimes bites me in the ass because sometimes I just want to write the story surrounding sex. But I’m slowly mastering the art of writing “[write this later]” or “[describe the pleasure here more sensually]” Good on you! @octavian
7/23/22, 3:27 AM
What happens when they pass the point of no return, where they realize that they've got no way to regain their cock size back to what it was. Does one pressure the other to lose more size to feel a little bit better, or do they embrace their small dicks and push to see just how far they can go~
Anonymous
7/23/22, 1:29 AM
Dude you’re making your readers do too much work putting the pieces together. Skinhead tf stories are one of my favorite fetishes and it’s a frustrating read. It’s up to you as the author to craft the story. I’m walking away from here.
7/22/22, 11:36 PM
Interesting story and world set up going on here. The breeding was hot, as is his like mind fuck thanks to it. I liked the description of pup types. Maybe I can find a subby bottom werewolf pup who needs pounding. Hehe But yeah sexy story. Well written and totally fun. Nice job.

7/23/22, 12:46 AM
@Heru Kane Who knows, maybe there are a select few canines who'll bend over for the right guy! It's all about getting lucky, eh? Thanks for reading and for the positive support. Have a good one!
7/22/22, 5:20 PM
I'm assuming that they mind wipe the men when they finish their sentences? This is if they are actually allowed to leave. In the US the 8th Amendment prohibits cruel and unusual punishment. There's no way any men who were allowed to leave would not tell the news media. This is why I'm guessing they mind wipe them.

7/22/22, 7:55 PM
@Cutlerfan Oh I was just assuming that somehow the ones that go here never get released. Fraudulent reports of bad behavior, accidents etc.

Evan
7/22/22, 11:31 PM
@Cutlerfan While this isn't the U.S. you are right that it would be inevitable that word would get out when prisoners are released without some sort of intervention. There are a number of ways to deal with that. Mindwiping is, indeed, one option at their disposal. But, it isn't the only one.

Evan
7/22/22, 11:36 PM
@Nocturne13 You have pointed out another possibility as to how the knowledge of what happens in these private prison ships - who need fuel for an advantage in their trading - can hold on to prisoners or stop the truth of their experience finding the light of day. In Phil's case, though. I wonder what you think would happen when the year of his sentence is up. This experience has definitely changed him and only in a few days. What would a year be like? Would he want to leave? Would the sentence being up be something dreaded rather than anticipated? He's an amp now and knows what that is like. Would he want to go back to being a man in the world with all the troubles and pressures that entails? Not to mention the lack of regular heights of pleasure on a near daily basis.
7/22/22, 3:15 PM
Holy shit that was incredibly hot! The arc of the scene was really well drawn, from resisting to submitting, each stage was super hot

Evan
7/22/22, 11:28 PM
@Bound_Up_Boy Thank you! Thank you, too, for commenting. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and that it perhaps pushed some of your buttons.
7/22/22, 2:30 PM
What I especially love about this story is how inexorable all the other characters know that it is, and how Phil seems to find that fascinating. I love Cho for his firm kindness and Cortez for how he contrasts that. My favourite line from Cortez is him sadistically declaring his love for bathtime while he sprays them down. And then there's the lore!!! I love the language you've chosen -- battery pack, amp, and so on, and how much it evokes. I would love to read more stories set in this universe! Thank you so much!

Evan
7/22/22, 11:27 PM
@time.to.occur Thank you. Your encouragement and kindness helped make this a finished story and far more polished than it ever would have been. I think Phil, like all of them at one point, were fascinated by the expectation of the inexorable nature of it. That the others had to put effort in to remember his point of view, being new to it all. Every new arrival probably finds that strange. Every new arrival believes that the cellmates are all wrong. They will be the exception. They'll put up with what they must and be on their way unchanged. They are always wrong. I enjoy the bath time line too. It's when we see Cortez at his happiest, I think. If I write more stories in this universe, then I promise to share.