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8/7/22, 4:43 PM
Oh wow what a twist! What s great story to continue =)
Anon
8/5/22, 5:42 PM
Hi! I just wanted to let you know that there are quite a few typos in the story summary, and thatโ€™s likely making people not bother reading it since itโ€™s the first exposure they get to the story. No shame here, but it might be a good idea to go back and edit the summary

8/6/22, 1:44 PM
@Anon oh thanks for the advice. i'll try to fix them
8/3/22, 2:36 AM
Hot Damn! Well written. Please continue. I want to hear how this angels became dominated and taken. Because they have some kinky overlords as masters.

8/3/22, 4:04 AM
@Marik29 That is altogether too kind of you. Believe me, this is simply the beginning. I have big plans for the rise of the Over-Master. Any kinks you'd particularly welcome?

8/3/22, 8:37 PM
@AngelSpanker, you have already hit on a few: Dominating, subjugation/enslavement, chasity, toys (dildo). And it seems a lot of these enslaved angels are muscular which is another big hit! And please keep 'sexualizing' a lot of what the angels must do. Like how this one had to sit on a dildo that seemed to have a mind of its own just to right in a book. I would recommend expanding the use of toys and gear such as collars, leash, leather/rubber, hoods, gags, etc. I'm really eager to read how they submitted and went through their conditioning. What do you think?

8/3/22, 8:42 PM
@Marik29 We seem to be of one mind. I like how you think. This is going to be a bit of a history, so I don't want to give too much away. Suffice it to say, it will definitely involve a _(lot)_ of haughty, stuck-up angelic tossers getting put in their place. If that means that legendary heroes and supreme warriors are humiliated, owned, and spanked until they cry, then so much the better.

8/3/22, 8:56 PM
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฟ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฟ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฟ@Marik29

8/4/22, 6:02 AM
@AngelSpanker @Marik29 This looks very nice. Me likes it a lot! This prologue by itself made me very hard (and would have made me cum If I hadn't refrained from it) and the kinks listed in this comment line are very nice too. Please please please keep on writing.

8/4/22, 7:40 AM
@Nephilim How kind of you to say! If I've gotten at always one person going, it hasn't been time wasted. And good on you for the restraint.

8/5/22, 8:22 PM
Also tattoos@U.K. guy
8/5/22, 5:15 PM
Will this be continued? I'd love to read what happens to this new rubber slave!
8/5/22, 9:07 AM
Awesome story, thank you!
8/4/22, 1:56 PM
This is just ridiculously good - your writing style just sucks a person in! THANK YOU
8/4/22, 12:06 AM
Umpf! Thank you for this hot addition and thank you for returning!

8/4/22, 12:58 PM
@oaken, glad to be back and that you enjoyed the chapter!
8/3/22, 7:02 PM
Nice to have you back. I remember checking the stories some weeks ago to see if I had not missed a new chapter. But there it is now ! Thanks for writing this story !

8/4/22, 12:57 PM
@Nephilim, thank you so much for all the love! Iโ€™m so Glad you enjoy the story :)
8/4/22, 3:19 AM
Very hot and well written! Please continue this soon! Would love to see more angels and demon in a hellhound collar!

8/4/22, 7:40 AM
@AlexH Thank you very much! Don't you worry. I intend to go into great detail about how these feathery fags were subjugated by their betters.