Recent Comments

8/2/22, 3:47 PM
What an enjoyable and well-written story. I would enjoy reading other similar tales. This is refreshing to find on this site as it is so unique yet erotic, too.

8/10/22, 3:41 AM
@JayBear Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like this! You might also enjoy some of my other stuff. There is actually a sequel to this story here: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10003291
8/9/22, 5:51 PM
This was great. Hoping the second chapter has some reveal for the back story. Will the alpha submit to his creator or is his creator a dominant bottom?
8/7/22, 3:47 AM
The story is great, but seems more of an idea of a story, or rather, it is a submission for somebody to take for another story. This chapter seems unfinished, but the idea is amazing. I believe it would wise to combine chapter 1 and 2 because it is still the same thought process, and not technically another chapter just because night and morning happening in between. A complete change of an idea is what creates different chapters. Plus I would love to read more of Ethan's life and how he became a pervert. Granted, since this site doesn't allow podophilic stories that could be difficult. I would love to find a website that allows sexual relations with minors since it add an intensity, or also a way to decompress fantasies in a legal way. Granted, I don't know dark websites so I choose to read stories as a way to decompress and it is difficult to find those besides nifty.org

8/7/22, 4:34 AM
@Rhinoman I'm sorry to be rude, but why are you trying to talk about this topic here? As you yourself note, this site doesn't allow stories about this topic, this story has absolutely nothing to do with this topic that you just brought up out of the blue, and it's probably not a good idea to hijack the comment thread to talk about it, especially not to (apparently) try to source other websites that have stuff on the topic.

Anonymous
8/9/22, 7:09 AM
@Retrofantasia Firstly, this is a thread to MY topic that I wrote in a story page. Secondly, my comment talking about pedophilic content was a warning towards _if_ there was a prequel in regards to the main character. Thirdly, my source, or citing, is called building up credibility or reference to other authors in regards to my feedback. People do this so you'll understand better what a person is trying to communicate. Fourth, I'm not trying to be rude or start any kind of argument/debate (cause you just misunderstood. I assume because you read _pedophilic_ and almost had a stroke cause it was even mentioned. Which, by the way, ephebophile would had been the correct word for me to had wrote.) I simply gave feedback on the work. The comment section, and I might be wrong, isn't to just say "Oh damn, wish that was me..." All I wanted was to give a critique. My wonder of wanting to read about minors is simply about someone at 18-19 yrs of age, but most go 20+ yrs. So its hard to find them without it being ephebophilic/podophilic. Perhaps I could had been more clear.
8/8/22, 4:01 PM
Super excited for this story given the set-up… love a loose sloppy fist hole and there are not nearly enough of those stories on here 😉😈
Nutiper
8/8/22, 5:54 AM
This is an intriguing start! The setting is great, too, and your opening does a nice job of introducing the rules of the demonic realm and its social strata. (Plus, who doesn't love a seductive demon character? 😉 ) I hope you feel inspired to write more!

8/8/22, 12:52 PM
@Nutiper Thanks for the confidence booster!!
Iriefal
8/8/22, 11:33 AM
Can't w8 for next part🥹🥹
8/8/22, 10:15 AM
lookin forward to the next story
8/8/22, 10:12 AM
hey, great, development is faster and faster. TOP! LOVE IT
8/8/22, 5:29 AM
Amazing stuff. Can't wait for more!