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9/14/22, 5:38 AM
Your work never fails to please. I’m reminded especially of Elmara’s Dumb Jock Roommate—such perfect vibes in both this story and that one. Loving it!

9/14/22, 9:36 PM
@Soren Fitz Thank you!
Anonymous
9/13/22, 5:17 PM
Great story so far ... hope there's many more chapters to follow. Hitting All MY BUTTONS. Thanks
9/13/22, 2:22 PM
Wow, very exciting in which direction this goes. I am looking forward to new chapters, where the slave is trained. Maybe there are others who are trained to be white exotic pets? :D
9/13/22, 3:50 AM
really liked this story to this point. you've been so creative with the drugs they take for the transformation, and then you end up with Meth, of all things? no thanks. it's so disgusting.
9/12/22, 11:41 AM
another great chapter you have written I for one would have liked to see him dress in a leather police uniform afterwards
musclejunkie
9/12/22, 11:19 AM
I have to agree with the comment about losing your plot. another point is the lack of character description. you spent so much time repeating yourself and not giving any details on what characters looked like or what their cocks looked like. you glaze over those points and introduce more and more characters and at some point, I hope there is some solution to his ordeal cuz so far his inability to get out of his situation has crossed into full rape, mental and physical abuse, and has less and less to do with submission and degradation in every chapter. right now Mark's situation has crossed a line into sheer hopelessness and that's just not sexy.
9/11/22, 2:50 AM
I loved this story, I'm commenting late, I know. I really like the stories of submissive tops and dominant bottoms, it's something rare to see and more on this site, I enjoyed it too much. I hope you continue with this story and characters or at least this universe you created. I feel that Jake lacked a bit of development, but I think I needed to know more about Rex, what happened to him? what was his story and why didn't it come out at the end? and most importantly, the story of quinn, who is he? How did he learn to hypnotize? Please continue creating stories like this.

9/11/22, 11:10 PM
@Franky Thank you so much for this lovely comment! I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much! I don't write a ton of slice-of-life-type stuff, but you might find other stories you enjoy on my profile! I'll have to think about Jake and Rex and what would have happened to them!
9/11/22, 6:46 PM
Nice and love the Sparky and Skippy stuff so sweet
9/11/22, 2:59 PM
So happy to read a new chapter in this story, one of my favorites on the site! 🤩