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11/12/22, 11:30 PM
Well, for starters, this was very well written and the base was nicely done. I would love to see where this is going and how are you gonna play with the power he has. Btw, I also love some big sub small top so, since you are saying that at the end, it fills me want to read the next chapter even more! I hope he can also get the teachers or some dads in the process too~

11/12/22, 11:54 PM
@[Udems](/user/show/16223) Well, not gonna lie, if you read between the lines here, you can already see where he will go. I mean, no spoiler, but it's here. You just have to look closerπŸ˜… And thank you for a compliment, I wrote for fun and maybe one day I will release the whole novel that I wrote on a side. It still need a lot of editing, but writing is my passion and finally I got some courage to post one of my ideas on this site. if it goes well I have soo much more prepared.
mic
11/12/22, 5:35 PM
wow so hot, shrink more, make a pussy out of him, so all guys could fuck him
Jonanator
10/21/22, 7:25 PM
Hot. Can't wait to read more.

11/12/22, 2:54 PM
@[Jonanator ](/user/show/863971) Soon I will publish the second chapter, but it will be less explicit, necessary to be able to start explaining some things.
11/11/22, 5:15 PM
Great story! I kept picturing myself as the guy in it, can't wait for more 🀀

11/12/22, 2:52 PM
@[Gayvota](/user/show/1800631) Thank you dear friend! Good to see you here!
Zai
11/11/22, 10:34 AM
Ahoy, Mateys! I write that because by the end of this day/night, Luthor's complex is gonna be awash in waves & waves of potent cum Waves! Upon! Waves! Of! Cum! πŸŒ€πŸ’§ Ain't no lol'ing about that fact! πŸš«πŸ˜‚ It's quite interesting that Lex somewhat easily acquiescenced to Python's demands. That is a very un-Luthor thing to do. Perhaps the tyrant is a bit mellowed out? Or playing a long game? With Lex' mind and personality? I'd venture with the latter. One thing I'd like to know, which I'm trying to recall if you ever revealed. Were we ever informed from were Python's genetic material came from? Clark|Superman? Cause that's downright incestuous, cum to think about it, lol, if that's the source. I keep having to break way from the story to look up all the kinky stuff you mention all these men dressing in. LOL! I'm excited to read that Rico will be checking in on the 3-some of Batman, Jimmy & BJ-El. It'll be hot if Rico gets in on their sexcapades. Especially if he gets to Dom The Batman. The Dark Knight could use some dark Latin cock down his throat and rammed up his Bat-pussy! Added bonus would be if Bruce is an ass virgin and is broken in during some heated interracial butt-fucking action!!! Thanks, SuperDude! πŸ˜πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‰πŸ€“πŸ˜›πŸ˜œπŸ˜

11/11/22, 4:12 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! Happy TGIF & THANKS 4 ALL of your positive thoughts/input/feedback!! I appreciate that you question Lex's diplomacy & who knows how this will play out?!?! At this point, I'm executing a chapter at a time, so sometimes, I dunno myself until I get in front of my computer!! Rico's involvement will be an interesting & unexpected one, as for me, he's quietly developed into "a wildcard character"-- so I'm THRILLED that you "tapped into that tangent" & line of thinking! :smiling_imp: As for the source of Python's genetic material, you pose a VERY intriguing point, but it's NEVER actually been revealed in the story (YET)!:astonished: Again, I'm SO GRATEFUL to you & the other readers for your kind comments/input/thoughts/feedback-- You guys INSPIRE me to keep "the twisted kink" coming (or should I say, "CUMMING")?!?!?!? LMFAO!!!:rofl: Have an AMAZING weekend, my friend!!:innocent:

Zai
11/11/22, 4:26 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Greetings, Earthling! LOL! How about General Zod being the donor for Python? Lex could easily get a sample or many, with his connections. And that would bring Zod's revenge full circle. Finally sealing fate by having Python be the one to bring down the House of El, so to say. Yeah, I'm liking Rico. He's playing at a very dangerous game. But he's adding some Latin heat to an already hot story. I just hope the stuff gets to fuck the cum outta Batman. Here's hoping you have a splendid weekend, too, SuperDude! 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

11/11/22, 8:05 PM
@Zai In Part 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 11 the author reveals that Python is a "Krypto clone". This is Krypto : https://superman.fandom.com/wiki/Krypto :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

11/12/22, 2:09 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Hi Anarchomegalomaniac!! Thanks for your note/comment! Just to clarify...when I refer to Python as a "Krypto clone"...I do mean Kryptonite...I shortened it simply for the purpose of "brevity" & NOT to refer to Superboi's adorable dog, Krypto, so my sincerest apologies for giving you that impression!! FYI, I've made various references to Python throughout this storyline as Krypto-clone or K-clone, simply to shorten the word-- but THANKS for your astute & sharp attention to detail!! ENJOY Your Weekend!!:innocent:

Zai
11/12/22, 2:19 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Hey! I know that cannot be the Kyrpto who Python was cloned from. It's a dog, called Krypto from a 1955 comic book. I believe our esteemed author shortened Kryptonian to Krypto. Python is a clone of an actual humanoid Kryptonian male. Otherwise, SupaSlut has been plowed by a dog clone, talked to a dog clone, kissed a dog clone, etc, etc, etc. And Beastiality is so not my thing, lol; and I bet not the writers, either, lol! That's why Superboivsvillain and I have discussed who the actual Kryptonian donor was for Python. Superman? General Zod? Thanks for your input, though. What do you think of the kinky heat our fun loving writer is creating? Take care, friend!
Nov 11, 2022
11/11/22, 5:25 PM
I'm so invested and love their dynamic. Hopefully Darnell gets to fuck Jayden, but I wouldn't mind Jayden making Darnell his complete bitch devoted to his cock and cum. Looking forward to more! Keep up the great work.
Zai
11/11/22, 6:08 AM
Crickey! Hot Damn! My jaws, throat & backdoor are figuratively hurting in sympathetic pain for SuperBitchPup! Yowser! Ouch! *Cue sad violin music... lol, lol, lol...* 🎻 Seriously, though? It's a good thing Clark|Superman is Kryptonian. Because I'm left wondering how any human male, no matter his fitness level, could take all those huge cocks and abuse without just expiring right there & then, huh?! Methinks it might be a good idea to for Lex to give the once asexual Kryptonian some exposure to yellow sun light. Be it created rays or the actual Sun. Help to heal up the stud's body to showroom new, lol; tighten up that SupaCunt to virgin-like tightness. 🌞🌝🌞🌝🌞🌝🌞🌝 Of course, Lex will be certain to have escorts there, to keep reminding the once formidable superhero about his new life; being the owned, bitched property of his Master(s). Maybe dosing him with a sweet treat infused with those special drugs. Now that, hmmm πŸ€”, once virgin to gay sex, hmmmm πŸ™„, yeahhhhh, right πŸ˜‰, Batman|Bruce has DP-d the dank vault of SupaSlut, but not been able to cum. I'm wondering what he, Jimmy, and BJ-El are going to do? What, with all three having had to vacate the arena AND SupaPup's steamy holes; just what will these three men do, huh??? Take their raging stiffies and commence into a good old fashion 3-way? If so, who'll be the spit-roast-ee, lol? Will the two younger studs turn the tables on the senior trainer, Bruce, and they become the trainers? Taking the Bat's mouth and ass-cunt out for a joyride? Begin Batman's journey into Bitch-hood? I'm surprised at Lex' diplomatic solution with Python! I smell a rat πŸ€, as in Luthor might be planning on re-training Python in the ways of the slave. Hmmmmmm... ... ... ❓❓❓ Ciao, SuperDude!

11/11/22, 3:56 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! Happy TGIF & THANK YOU 4 your respective positive thoughts/comments-- (Chuckling)...you've given me a LOT to chew on!! It's once again ASTUTE of you to smell a rat in Luthor & ALL will eventually be revealed in the subsequent chapters!:smiling_imp: Bruce will be returning soon enough (with the 2 bois) & they will collectively have to "field an unexpected curveball"!! That's ALL I can share at this time...but I'm SO glad you're continuing to ENJOY the storyline!! ENJOY your day (& your weekend)!!:innocent:

Anonymous
11/11/22, 4:10 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Hello, SuperDude! Yes, coitus Interuptous for our four sex fiends was a hoot! 4 boners, loaded balls, and no shots fired! We all know how that feels, correct? LOL! Luthor? I'll be truthful, I always like some loving feels and romance, so I was hoping the hung hunk would eventually realize he has some special πŸ’– for Superman. Of course the studly, pretty boi hero will always belong to Lex; but there's good times ahead, too! Oh yes!!! I'm in the process of publishing my first work here. I guess it goes through some review process or what? I titled it "The Croc and His Bat." It's all about Killer Croc, aka Waylon Jones bitching Batman. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ¦‡πŸ¦‡πŸ¦‡πŸŠπŸŠπŸŠπŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…

11/11/22, 5:04 PM
Hi Anonymous!! Thanks 4 your positive comments/feedback!! I'm so appreciative 4 your/the other readers' thoughts/ideas/insight-- it continues to feed the "inner kinky windmills of my mind":smiling_imp: And don't worry-- I won't leave "the 4 sex fiends" HANGIN 4 long:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: As for Luthor, in this particular storyline, I characterize him like "a devilish onion", with ever-evolving layers to be "peeled back" & strategically revealed, so I hope you thoroughly ENJOY how his "ongoing villanous, yet seductive growth" will continue!!:smirk_cat: I will DEF keep an "eagle eye" out for your story featuring Killer Croc & the BATMAN-- sounds HOTTT!!:fire: and BTW, yes, the Spiral review staff is EXCELLENT about executing the process as quickly as possible, but from what I understand, they have been recently "bogged down" with a "literary tidal wave" of stories, so it might take a bit longer, so be patient (I'm not the most patient person, so it's an "personal growth exercise" for me, LOL!)!!! Again, THANKS 4 the positive comments & ENJOY your weekend!:sunglasses:
Nov 11, 2022
Jonanator
11/11/22, 4:41 PM
Curious if they will fall in love?
Zai
11/11/22, 10:50 AM
Oh yes, I forgot to mention that BJ-EL is now calling Bruce, sir. Hmm, that's a new twist. Maybe Bruce could be fucking Jimmy or Bizzaroboi, and Rico cums along, ready to fuck. So first he'd feed his Hispanic long schlong down Batsy's throat, then get behind the superhero's jockstrapped, round muscled ass and begin munching on the virgin snatch. Of course we all would love for the sexy bodyguard, aka hero wrangler, aka Dominator of superhero bitch's to pop Bruce's cherry so hard and so, so, deep. Yummmmmmm... πŸ‘…πŸ’

11/11/22, 4:20 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) THANKS, ZAI, 4 your addendum comments!! Yes, I :heartpulse: that you pick up on the "various nuances" that I "lob out" to the readers in this storyline!! The next couple of chapters will be "baited" with exciting, unexpected "scene shifts", that will hopefully keep the readers "on the edge of their seats" & "pining for MORE"!!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: THX a MILLION for your :sparkling_heart: & support!!:pray: Have a SPANK-tacular weekend!!:boom:
11/11/22, 7:31 AM
Good chapter, but i feel a twist coming on somewhere. Lex as a Master will not want to give up control so easy

11/11/22, 4:00 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Hi MalSkin!! THANK YOU 4 your kind words/comments! You are right to feel a twist coming/cumming....AND it is CUMMING!!! Appreciate your positivity & Have an AWESOME weekend!:innocent: