Recent Comments

Chriscam
11/1/22, 11:35 PM
Congrats and THANKS!! For your work. I'm a big fan. Just hope see the chapter 4 in the Halloween party today or so... ;)
11/1/22, 9:07 PM
Thanks, Darby!! Appreciate your positive comments & encouragement-- I've been a HUGE Superman fan since I was a kid, but when seeing some of the original films & he was "matched up against a villain", I've always wanted some of the movies/storylines to "push the envelope", i.e., withh him being feeling more dominated & humiliated --so I hope I'm satisfying you/the other readers with this series!! :innocent:
DeShawn
1/11/22, 9:21 AM
Can't wait til holiday is over. Mark's got a hot little bitch. He needs to spank him and tell him no more workin. The corporation shouldn't get to say who Mark's property sucks. If Mark thinks stevie has been rude to one of Mark's Norm friends, Mark can demand stevie give a bj but no one but Mark should make that call. in 2022, I hope to see stevie spanked over his master's lap repeatedly while stevie cries and begs like a little boy. That makes me hard when my sub teddy squirms across my lap while begging ''stop Daddy!" and I don't until he's crying. Stopping a spanking before the tears flow is like pulling out before you cum. Mark needs to really take possession and ownership. I don't spank teddy because I hate him. I spank him because it's hot that he's my boy and it's hot to know he doesn't want it (especially in front of others). I spank him to hear him beg and promise to do a better job at obeying. But there's one other reason. He'll deny he needs it and argue but he does need it and when it's over, he can't get enough of me. He wants me to hold him, he can't stop kissing me and he usually starts licking my neck and armpits while he begs me to fuck him into his place. Which I gladly do because I love my little subby with all my heart.

1/11/22, 10:47 PM
@DeShawn Wow, thanks for sharing your very personal life experiences with your close ones. That sure was informative! Great to hear you are looking forward to the continuing series.

11/1/22, 4:07 PM
@DeShawn Wow Sir. What a great I sight into how to treat a sub.
Gary
1/8/22, 4:17 AM
“Boy don’t interrupt your Master; and that’s another thing, you shouldn’t be talking unless someone asks you a question. I’ll be lenient while we grow into our roles, but at work, you need to respect your superiors. You’re an inferior, remember, you don’t have those rights.” That flew right over sub steve's head but every Dom reading this just got hard thinking about the first time we broke a sub down. This isn't about working for a corporation to Mark, "“Boy don’t interrupt your Master; and that’s another thing, you shouldn’t be talking unless someone asks you a question. I’ll be lenient while we grow into our roles"

1/8/22, 6:51 PM
@Gary Thanks for getting in touch. Wow, that's really interesting. I'm glad you were able to see it from a Dom's point of view. I had been looking at the scene from Steve's point of view but I can definitely see now the method that Mark was using as a Dom to break Steve. Thanks for giving me a fresh perspective on my own writing haha!

11/1/22, 3:34 PM
@Gary It’s really interesting to hear your Dom perspective on this story. I’m sure most of us reading a subs, but it’s good to know that there are some true Masters out there.
11/1/22, 9:15 AM
I love a good cock shrink story especially when he’s a jock. Loved it. More please.
11/1/22, 3:26 AM
Faaaantastic lead up, but damn I wish Pa would have had more fun with him.
10/29/22, 7:30 PM
Yes please. More defeat and humiliation for Superman.

10/30/22, 12:33 AM
@[Darby Thomas](/user/show/10017156) Thanks, Darby!! Appreciate your comment & there's DEFINITELY more humiliation & subjugation on the way 4 Supes!! :innocent:

11/1/22, 1:41 AM
I love this story. Superman being a gay faggot has always been one of my favourite tropes. @[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379)
10/31/22, 8:40 PM
I loved this story! Love to see Soren Fitz's hallmark belly inflation kink on full display. I loved the wah that you take up the theme of queerness tying into magic and otherness with such appreciation and care. I also loved the concept of the nympho sprites in particular. The repeated thread/idea of letting the magic/cock/cum/new experiences in and Aaron's openness made this a fantastically hot read. Thank you for this.

11/1/22, 1:06 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) One of the major ‘ohh’ moments when I was coming up with this sorry was the realisation that queer people might just be _better_ at magic, at least throughout history, because they pursued sexuality for mutual pleasure instead of a biological imperative like reproduction. It was an easy step after that to suggest that their past demonisation was in part due to their connection with magic and the threat that posed to power. The nymphomaniac spirits, I feel, breathed a life into their story that it needed especially in act 1–and I was thrilled when I came up with the idea for human-ghost double penetration. It just started naturally happening and I was like “fuck, this is perfect!” And, yeah, as much as I threatened an ominous spell, Aaron’s ‘falling’ is meant to be a really wholesome, exciting experience that has the same magic as, say, stumbling into Narnia. ‘Let him be Lucy’ was my homage to that classic fantasy trope. Thanks for reading! I’m glad you enjoyed.
10/31/22, 11:22 AM
I'm so curious what would've happened with the demon. Very hot story!

10/31/22, 2:54 PM
@[Braindrainme](/user/show/10018131) Trying to figure out what the hell demons do was a major catalyst of many of the magic system developments that made the worldbuilding in this story possible! … uh, but I’d still be writing out of my ass if I said exactly what that demon would have done right now. Rest assured there would have been knotting, and maybe even some transformation. Glad you found the story hot!
Sebastián Apollo
10/31/22, 4:59 AM
I'm always amazed when people make these worlds and universes and can write stories that seamlessly fit into them - I'm incredibly envious. As A Possession a Day noted, the worldbuilding you flowed throughout the story along with the mystical elements really serves the work well. Great job, and a very worthy contender!

10/31/22, 2:52 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) It gets easier as the world grows and fills out! The world of Consummation is two years in the making, and still evolving. I actually did a fair amount of history and magic system work to construct the game of questions in this story, at least its original iteration (the draft I finished Friday). I’m glad you enjoyed what I built here! Feels good to know that I’m accomplishing the themes and feelings I intended. And I’m looking forward to reading your most recent story, too…