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11/4/22, 2:05 PM
Ciao ZAI!! Thank YOU 4 your excitement about the upcoming chapters-- I hope to please you & the other readers with the direction(s) of the story!! P.S. With respect to your question-- Chapter 8 is uploaded already & its currently being reviewed for approval, which I hope will happen soon, so that you & others are able to satiate your/their "kink appetitites" for the upcoming weekend!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: This is honestly "my first go" at writing gay erotica/kink, although I've been a HUGE fan of other writers work on this site/other sources, e.g., Jack Parker, Cicero, Hector Oppenheimer, Oliverclaudiusdarcy and others, so I encourage you to follow your inspiration and "put pen to paper" (as the saying goes)!! Ciao Bello & ENJOY the weekend!!:innocent:
11/4/22, 5:33 AM
Hey ZAI!! Thanks again for your continued inspiring comments!! They fuel/energize me to be MORE creative, brainstorm new twists & turns for Superman, which allows me to really get "my kink on"-- BTW...I'm awaiting approval for PART 8 to launch, but I already have Parts 9 & 10 uploaded!! Hope you will ENJOY them thoroughly over the weekend!!:wink:

Zai
11/4/22, 8:48 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Oh Wow! 3 new up-cumming h🔥t new chapters. Yahoo! Just a quick query - why do you need approval to upload chapter 8? Is that just standard for gayspiralstories? Eventually, I'd like to write some gay fiction/fanfiction and publish it on this site. Thanks for the informing me about the treat I and my fellow readers get to enjoy soon! Ciao, Dude! 😀😁😛😜
11/3/22, 1:10 PM
Ciao ZAI!! LMAO....you sure know how to INSPIRE me!!! I assure you...your vivid curiosities will hopefully be satiated soon enough!!! DEF Feeling your exciting kink ENERGY through your positive words, praise & suggestions-- it fuels me to only sharpen my creative mind to execute a better story 4U & the other readers!! THANK YOU from the depths of my kinky mind-- U have yourself an AWESOME day!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Zai
11/4/22, 5:13 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Yo! Dude! Thanks for your positivity! It's very refreshing and adds more smiles to my day! Yes, I do love me some studs in various articles of clothing. Especially really tight and finely tailored items. Skintight Speedos & jocks. Suits. Chinos & jeans. Wrestling, baseball, football, etc uniforms. Cop, military, etc uniforms... Especially motorcycle cops 👅. Etc, etc, etc. I'm excited to read how you develop this fine, kinky story. You have definitely surprised me more than once and yes, you via this erotic adventure have left me... ummmm... errrr... well, rock hard from hot dreams... ... ... lol... 🛏😴😲 Adios, Dude!
11/3/22, 1:20 PM
Ciao ZAI!! THANK YOU (again), Sir-- I'm humbled by your multiple messages of positivity this AM!!! I really enjoyed writing this chapter (if you can't tell!), especially cuckolding Supes & Jimmy's multiple confrontations w/the hero during the sensual massaging of Luthor-- most of what's occurring with Jimmy is drug-induced, but he certainly seems to be enjoying the sexual aspects of his newfound kink and I hope you approve of the upcoming clothing (or lack thereof) in the forthcoming installments!! Happy WET Dreams, kind Sir!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Zai
11/4/22, 4:59 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) I'm quite certain I'll enjoy the series as you progress the story. It's like a multiple course meal at a 5 st☆r restraunt, with several tasty 'Cock'tails before the meal. And let's not forget dessert and the afters then a glass of port. Of course, like Jimmy, Supes newly acquired desire (bad pun, lol) for cock & cum is mainly drug induced. PLUS, both have the main ingredient changing them; this being the villainous genius of Lex Luther... and his huge cock which he uses like a pendulum/watch to hypnotize his bois. 🖤💙💚👅👅👅👅👅👅💚💙🖤
Zai
11/3/22, 10:17 AM
Yup! All three dudes, Superman, Python, and Jimmy are 100% Lex' enthralled cock and cum slaves. So it seems at this point, Jimmy will be the lucky hunk to pop SuperFaggot's virgin Kryptonian Kunt! Lucky, lucky boi, indeed! I hope you dress Superman in some sexy clothes... a skintight Speedo or Wrestling gear, maybe a jockstrap as he wrestles his once loved buddy. Jimmy definitely took to cock and cum. That little red-headed Slut has been Bitched quite well. Thanks and I'll send you the dry cleaning bill for the wet dreams I'm certain to have, lol!
11/2/22, 1:31 PM
Hey ZAI....You JUST made my day--THANKS a MILLION for your positive comments (& suggestions)!! YES, I do plan to bring Batman into the storyline, as well as some of the Titans (as I'm primed UP 4 the Season 4 tomorrow)!!! I appreciate ALL of your thoughts/suggestions/insights & will do my BEST to incorporate some of them into the upcoming storyline-- in fact, as I read your comments, it's provided me an inspirational brainstorm to pivot from a forthcoming scene which could introduce the Caped Crusader, although my focus will still be DEFINITELY concentrating on the ongoing degradation, subjugation & humilation of the Supabitch-- but THANK YOU, Sir-- I'm humbled-- Have an AWESOME day!!:innocent:

Zai
11/3/22, 4:50 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) You deserve positive praise and thanks for creating, writing & sharing this wonderful AU! Yay! Batman will eventually make an appearance and hopefully become part of Luthor's Lascivious Superhero Harem! Where nothing but muscled pretty boi studly men are always at the ready to service their Master's multitude of carnal needs! I'm excited to read who officially will be popping Superman's virgin Suppa-ass-pussy! Will it be Python, wearing a reptile print Speedo as he plows that Super-cunt? Jimmy, shoving his newly enlarged, angry red cock-rocket up his one-time pals twat? Or his true Master? His only real Master? Lex Luthor! The hottest bald hunk ever? With his humongous cock of death? Ramming and pulverizing the supremely tight, virgin Superman-honey-hole as he has the Kryptonian in a white jockstrap while he's wearing a scarlet, sheer Speedo?! Can you tell I've got a ripe and vivid clothing fetish/kink!?!? Ciao!
11/3/22, 12:54 AM
Hey Darby!! Glad you're enjoying the successive chapters & ongoing storyline!! Also, pleased you're saving this chapter for bedtime-- Hope that you thoroughly ENJOY it!! BTW...I can ASSURE you that this is NOT the end....I already several chapters "waiting in the wings"... I'm just doing "some fine tuning" before I publish them!! Sleep well, my friend!!:innocent:
11/2/22, 8:41 PM
Saving this chapter for bed time but definitely hoping this isn’t the final chapter, .
11/1/22, 12:51 AM
You did such a good job of worldbuilding and kicking this off with a wonderful, immersive atmosphere. The creation of the question game had such an element of fae creatures and fairytales, like Rumpelstiltskin and what have you. I’ll be honest and say that those fantastical, immersive elements came and went for me — I think they could have been carried through the action a little more thoroughly to elevate the sex scene beyond the already high level it reached. Regardless, this story is an accomplishment! You swung for the fences, and your love of the craft of writing shines through. Excellent work!

11/2/22, 5:51 PM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Yeah, I felt like the question game would really add to the mystique and I’m glad you liked it! I really wanted to get that immersive vibe and have that carry people through the story—it’s only that last sex scene that I didn’t have time to perfect or even spiritualise. But I appreciate you noticing my love for “the craft of writing”—I wanted to make this something that was really truly good _work_, and I think for the time I had I knit together something that let my skill shine through. Thanks for reading! And may the following chapters contain much more spiritual sex…
11/2/22, 4:26 PM
nice opener! I hope you'll continue this, I'm very intrigued where this is exactly going. in the end, it's still the older brother that has got the dream dick, so how is this gonna play out? also, you can include the pictures in the story on here, too!