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12/5/22, 5:34 AM
Color me intrigued; definitely like the whole _American Gods_ vibe and I like the resistance Yates puts up against Erame. I would like to see how Erame's power has made Yates better, stronger, and faster. Hopefully that will appear in the next episode.

12/5/22, 7:38 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) I haven't read American Gods but I will take that as a good thing. And yes Yates isn't going to just given in and while he'll stay how his abilities have been upgraded I'm not sure how much will be shown as I'm not interested in writing combat or the missions themselves but we'll see.

12/5/22, 10:35 PM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) I was actually referring to the show, but you do bring up the point of reading Neil Gaiman in writing. But I do get the vibes of the dynamic between Shadow Moon and Mr. Wednesday in Yates and Erame. As to showing how Yates has leveled up, you don't have to confine it to missions or combat; you could easily show a training session where he's starting to leave the other team members behind or running a shooting course and hitting every mark with near-perfect shots.

12/5/22, 11:24 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) I haven't watched the show either (forgot there even was one) And those would work how to show Yates has become better, just need to make sure I have an interesting way to work them into the story.
12/5/22, 10:13 PM
You are full of surprises. I had forgotten that Sean was on the table in the basement. This chapter was awesome. We are spoiled by you.
12/5/22, 9:20 PM
This is what I’m here for. Absolutely fantastic and smoking hot.
12/5/22, 7:43 PM
Holy. Freakin. Hell.
Anonymous
12/4/22, 8:47 PM
Such an amazing story, Derek! Thanks for this master piece!

12/5/22, 5:49 AM
You’re very welcome!
12/5/22, 5:31 AM
I actually liked part two better! I'm a sucker for a plausible, satisfying solution to an impossible situation.
Jonanator
12/2/22, 10:47 AM
Very good. I like it.

12/5/22, 3:13 AM
@Jonanator Thank you for sticking with us! Great to hear you're still reading and enjoying!

Jonanator
12/5/22, 4:18 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) No problem
12/3/22, 1:30 PM
Mouse deserves better. TT Rhys and Lemon are starting to question what's up with Jasper, that's good. But oh no, the other thiefs are in trouble 0_0

12/5/22, 3:14 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) <3 We are so mean to them sometimes but we love the characters so! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts -- we really appreciate it.
12/2/22, 7:58 AM
So, so, so excited to read the next chapter. Thank you. I have been hanging out for a new installment for a while. This was worth the wait. What a fantastic chapter. Plot is making leaps and bounds and the characters continue to grow deeper and spread their web of connection. I hope Iskios turns out to be trustworthy. It'd be so nice if they all find a place together. You know, if the group actually can get back together again after all this. There's just so much in this chapter. I'm so curious about Mouse and just what is going on there and also totally creeped out by the clear and disturbing abuse from Aris on the poor lad. I'm glad he had a fun sex scene with a bunch of other pets to start off his stay. Especially since he's an indoor pet. Rhys and Jasper are just the sweetest. I love them so much and want them to be disgustingly happy together. Even Lemon has a heart! Even though his motivations are in keeping Rhys safe and well. The Greek Play was a surprise and a great expansion of the world and the culture. Love this world and really, really need to know what happens next. No pressure or anything... but pretty please? :)

12/5/22, 3:13 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) We're so happy to have you as our reader. Thanks again for reading through the draft. It's such a delight to hear your thoughts!
12/5/22, 1:22 AM
Excelente...

12/5/22, 2:34 AM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Thank you.