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1/2/23, 9:39 AM
Loved it - the thought of being made completely powerless to another’s desires whatever they may be and being physically and emotionally stripped of any ability to resist their commands whatever whenever and wherever they might arise is so frighteningly seductive that I can’t be absolutely positive which part of me will ultimately win out… I was with you every step of the way. Loved when his body would react against his will as the drugged out confusion swarmed his senses… Thank you

Dylan
1/5/23, 11:25 PM
@[SMYTHE](/user/show/10032428) Tyler and the other boys involved might share the feeling .....
1/2/23, 12:43 AM
Is it Saturday yet?!!!

Dylan
1/5/23, 11:25 PM
@[Dannylydbi](/user/show/14921) Would you maybe enlighten me what you mean? :smiley: But maybe : Thx anway !
1/1/23, 10:52 PM
Super story:100:

Dylan
1/5/23, 11:24 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thank you, look for the next parts!
1/1/23, 10:41 PM
Hot stuff! Appreciate someone who goes through the trouble of including images.

Dylan
1/5/23, 11:23 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you, i try to keep it up!
1/5/23, 5:46 PM
I like it, i wonder who will be next
1/5/23, 4:46 PM
Great start. I love when men get charged into sluts. can't wait for more chapters.
1/5/23, 6:32 AM
Interesting premise. Curious to read more
12/29/22, 10:35 PM
I liked the story but would think a bit of resistance and some manipulation would have helped make this a hot story. Not having mind control is fine but I just think a bit of manipulation would have worked. Like he does a thing that makes Matt more willing to comply, for example with me it's have my ears nibbled a certain way. That and/or maybe using a little bit of guilt to get him to start dressing up and give him a reason to like dressing up and make Matt think he's manipulating the situation but it's really Oliver. Lastly it could be a situation where his clothing was "lost" in the move and he's stuck wearing his boyfriend clothes for a bit and is brought around to wanting to dress like this. That's just some ideas.

12/30/22, 12:42 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) Thank you so much for your comment and ideas, I will bear them in mind for the next part!

12/31/22, 8:38 PM
@[formalboy](/user/show/10030609) No problem just figured I'd give some advice.

Anonymous
1/4/23, 6:38 AM
@[formalboy](/user/show/10030609) I hope you're continuing the story - good intro
1/4/23, 3:43 AM
God I love this series so much! Like another commenter I hope Nick’s muscles aren’t gone for long but this chapter opens so much going forward and really makes me excited for what’s next! In particular Darius’ loss of inhibitions and the knowledge of exactly what was done to them make me look forward to how it plays out.
6/9/22, 7:28 AM
I'm glad I got a chance to read this! I love endings like this, it's twisted but almost wholesome somehow. Also the name Barkley is just *_Chef's Kiss_*

6/9/22, 12:45 PM
@Norismo Different strokes, I guess! When I read stories like this (and there are a great many of them, not picking on Artemis, I love many of his stories) I cannot escape the feeling that I'm witnessing a murder. The parts of the story that try to prop up the justification for the revenge always read like copes to me. "I was bullied." "he cheated on me." "he's a homophobe." Well yeah, and you're a murderer and that's worse so... is always my reaction.

6/9/22, 7:22 PM
@amul A lot of hypno stories are troubling if you allow yourself to think about them :sweat_smile:

1/4/23, 2:13 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) @[amul](/user/show/10003734) I am such a Gemini that i happily agree with you both! I prefer stories that don't involve murdering someone. On the other hand if a 'murder' doesn't actually involve death or dismemberment, and is done gently and there are enough hot kinks involved, like hypnosis, mind control, transformation, power exchange, etc., i can focus on the good stuff and ignore the rest as just fantasy. (The good stuff isn't fantasy, since i am hoping some of it might actually happen!) One potential compromise to this dilemma is hypnotic triggers similar to those Paul installed in Bradley that allow maintaining the original personality, as well as other 'modes' like the 'Barkley' mode in this story for example. Of course when you're dealing with an impossible storybook douche like Bradley, the writer certainly has the license to try to correct the situation. In any case i did enjoy the story, and would like to thank Artemis for sharing his imagination and writing skills.