Recent Comments

2/18/23, 10:16 PM
really glad you kept the story going, dom bottom stories are so darn rare :3 The water sport element was really hot, love to see the tops crave the bottom so much so to a point that they tries to find inconspicuous ways to get his pee.
2/18/23, 8:58 PM
So glad you came back to this. And that I saw it in my feed!!!
2/18/23, 8:43 PM
This story is SO FREAKING GOOD!! 🤩🤤🥰
Feb 17, 2023
Anonymous
2/18/23, 8:36 PM
I just love this. Great story. Hope you continue it, please!
2/18/23, 12:13 PM
When will the next chapter being coming out?
Feb 17, 2023
2/18/23, 11:07 AM
I'm sorry, but AI generated stories should have no place here. There's no soul or eroticism to it. AI still runs based on biased coding. We're nowhere near it having a presence in creative communities where it won't create harm.
Feb 17, 2023
2/18/23, 3:17 AM
It will be interesting to see how AI writing develops, but it's just not there yet. ChatGPT in particular has been hobbled to prevent it from writing erotic scenarios and dialogue. I'm not sure it's any good at writing fiction at all yet, but it particularly is unable to capture the erotic charge necessary for this type of story. To the author, I would suggest you take what the AI has put out and try to re-write it in your own words, and flesh it out. Add some characterization and flourishes to breathe life into it. That would be more productive than having the AI continue to produce stories like this as a finished product. I understand how frustrating writer's block is. Try to let the AI help you push through it, but don't let it tell your story on its own. It's not up to the task.

2/18/23, 4:47 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I love this feedback
Feb 17, 2023
2/18/23, 2:33 AM
not a single AI-generated or assisted story on this website has had any kind of genuine eroticism to it.
Feb 17, 2023
2/17/23, 11:57 PM
oh VERY nice story you need a couple more chapters
2/17/23, 11:12 PM
AHHH every new chapter I hope to read something that will make me like Marcus or at least tells me why he is such an asshole but all I get are more secrets and more questions :D Anyway great chapter as always. I am really looking forward to your chapters as they are a delight to read. I was quite sad back in the day when you stopped writing on here and there was no way of reaching you but I am just glad you are back.