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2/4/23, 6:30 PM
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens to Jack and Dylan.
2/4/23, 5:53 PM
Really enjoyed this chapter, has everything that ticks my boxes, latex, superhero's corrupted into villains. Seems that Jamie, is disheartened about being put on suspension, (No fault of his own i feel) He is a perfect addition for **The Master**, I look forward to the next chapter. I wonder what happened to his friends? maybe the two drones mentioned are his friends already converted to be worker drones.
2/4/23, 5:57 AM
You know what I'm gonna say. Loved seeing Dick being all Dom. Another amazing chapter as usual and can't wait to see who the new addition in the bathroom is :P

2/4/23, 2:17 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Hi Fanboi!! THANK YOU, my friend!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: THRILLED that U enjoyed this chapter & will do my BEST 2 keep U "on the edge"!!:smiling_imp: GR8FUL 4 your positive comments & ENJOY your weekend!:sun_with_face:
2/4/23, 9:44 AM
Love this, should be highly rated. Particularly enjoyed the Doctor character and how he gets off by enslaving the young men- the master of all he surveys, even if he isn't explicitly involved in the action he'll be standing there with a big old hard-on in his fine suit trousers as he watches the young men play. Long live the perverts!
2/4/23, 3:17 AM
oh man, what a great cliffhanger ending! I'm so excited to see what happens next
Jan 22, 2023
2/4/23, 1:43 AM
This is a fun story that engages with a somewhat uncommon kink. To me, the dental/orthodontia kink is so horny and you did a good job with it. The mind control sequence was interesting and fit into the story perfectly. You've obviously cleaned the text up from when you first published - I found only one small typo on casual reading: > He put on his gloves and asked Viktor to open. After checking his teeth he confirmed that they were misaligned, that affected his teeth aesthetically, but more importantly he had a bit of an overbite and that the mist convenient thing would be to get braces for his bite to work well. Viktor got nervous about the idea again. "mist" should be 'most'. Great job, story is enjoyable and hot.
2/4/23, 1:05 AM
I enjoyed both versions of this story. The realistic one was a solid one-hander; short in length but long enough to offer some good details and bring everything to the point you wanted at the end. The magical re-write was also a nice horny story. I felt like the transformations were a bit too fast and easy, but they were very hot. Having read your more recent transformation story (for the Secret Satan contest) I'm comfortable saying you are improving your descriptions of transformations which is important for that kink. As far as imagination and horny transformation ideas, you're already there. Just hang onto what your brain is already telling you because it's great.
2/3/23, 11:54 PM
I am really excited about this series.
2/3/23, 2:27 PM
Hey, just found this and am loving the strangeness you conjure up. I always prefer first-person narrative as it makes the characterisation more immediate. I can see this can go in several directions but however you take it forward Sam is falling love with the master magician, just hope it gets even wilder and more perverse on the way! Looking forward to the next chapter. Billy

2/3/23, 11:29 PM
@[Whitechap_e1](/user/show/219792) Thank you! What i love about magic stories is that you can really go wild with it. It's definitely gonna get more perverse XD
Gingcub
2/3/23, 11:35 AM
The wager element was a fun addition! Any chance of Rex joining Stanley in chastity?

2/3/23, 11:24 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) ;)