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2/19/23, 10:40 PM
Maybe Skippy keeps acting out because he just loves Titan's attention that much (can't blame him).

2/26/23, 3:11 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Hehe it could be. He certainly has become devoted to his alpha in a fairly short time.
2/25/23, 12:27 PM
This is a great start. Chad and Ethan are enjoyable characters. The spellbook means this could go any direction, the plant doesn't even need to remain an important part of the story you could quite literally take this any direction you wish. One thing I will say, because I myself was reminded of this recently, is that you ought not to use tags on a chapter that aren't in that particular chapter. A story will inherit all tags used across the story. So for example, no one was droned in this chapter. Maybe that will happen in a future chapter, but not yet. So save that tag until it's relevant. Great job and look forward to seeing where this one goes after the contest.
2/25/23, 10:37 AM
I really enjoyed this story, so I added it to my favourites. It would be really nice, if you go deeper into the settings, there is so much potential to build a huge world about boys getting turned into drones throughout multiple themes. Also for this story to be a bit more detailed. What is the protagonist feeling seeing all turned into drones, what does the process feeling like, what really happened to his friend… did he maybe even surrendered willingly? So much room for so much greater stories to come, keep it going ;)
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2/25/23, 8:42 AM
Pretty hot, though I'd be lying if I said I wasn't hoping for some big locker room orgy(or perhaps out on the pitch?), even if this is more realistic. I do like that the romance theme is still present, will that continue in future chapters? And will we learn more about the drones?
2/25/23, 6:48 AM
I am very interested to know who Anette is and how a supposedly ordinary princess can have so much mental resistance. Was she also a Wizard? A Cleric? Or maybe a Paladin? Finally there's complications for our manipulative mage. Waiting new chapters, best wishes!
2/23/23, 11:58 AM
out of curiosty, is the name daybreaker connected to dawn/Dusk?

2/23/23, 1:34 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) Good catch! Can't reveal too much but we shall see... :smiling_imp:

2/25/23, 6:36 AM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) extremely high quality, engaging choice of words, and a very enticing plot! aaaaaa
2/25/23, 6:06 AM
Wow, that was spectacular! Can’t wait to see where this goes next!
2/25/23, 5:41 AM
Thank you for the warning about future chapters! 🤗
2/25/23, 5:39 AM
Oh hell yes!!!! 😍😍😍
2/24/23, 10:10 PM
Late comment, but the humour in these stories just kills me (in a good way!) "He also enjoys being urinated on, particularly his face. But only Gemma is into that and she’s a bitch" was easily the funniest line in smut I've ever heard. The stories themselves are hot and hit mist of my spots, but the humour just adds to it