so this is where DS-011 got his start 🤔🤔🤔🤔

I concur with the people praising your talent @Neon Demon. This story may have the odd editorial lapse, but it's terrific writing. It's become my go to when I'm ready to shoot, and hasn't failed me yet. One of the things about really good writing is that it keeps the reader constantly intrigued and engaged. It gives you just the right amount of details, and lots of little mysteries that have you imagining all sorts of fascinating scenarios. There are hints all over the place, which may or may not get fleshed out into answers. And as we saw in this chapter, answers often create new mysteries to wonder about. Thanks for letting us see what happened to Jack and Dylan. That's one bit of resolution. But there's so much left to wonder about. What was Minotaur's fate and why did that "fucker" deserve it? Do all of Master's drones get to play with their cocks on Sundays? Why does DS-008/Horizon have a voice lock when DS-005/Dusk and DS-011/Pet do not? Which state is the norm for Master's superdrones and lesser drones? Is it a punishment or part of DS-008/Horizon's "breaking in"? What is Cerberus? Will that little dab of latex that snuck into Luxor cause his eventual submission to Master Myriad? And, of course, the central conundrum of whether Jamie will eventually find his bliss as Master's DS-013/Daybreak superdrone or remain unhappily Kid Rocket in the drudgery of his service to the League and some conventional notion of "heroism." Gee, I wonder which one I'd rather see? I don't know that we need the details of every superdrone's story, but DS-005/Dusk and DS-008/Horizon are such great subsidiary characters that it would be wonderful to read prequels with their stories. From the way Theo was talking, I wouldn't be surprised if he were a latex fetishist to begin with, and the voice lock is there because he fantasized about being a gimp. And assuming what Master said about the relationship between voluntary submission and power boosts was the truth, then clearly, Midnight wasn't the only one who came willingly into Master's service. And then there was Master's comment that willingness is a spectrum. Is it willingness at the time of submission that's the key, or does it have to be willingness while still completely or mostly free? Or maybe it's the length of struggle during the conversion process that's key - ie. the struggle could drain a super's powers, such that there's less and less to boost by the time they finally submit. Oh well, thank you for all these horny mysteries to ponder, and please keep up the great work.

Another great chapter! I'm a sucker for porn with a plot, so very excited to hear that this is moving more in that direction. If I could soapbox a bit, I totally get that in the hypno genre generally and with drones specifically, it's a very fine line between too much and too little exposition. Too little and obviously it's difficult to get invested. But I also think a big part, if not the main part of drones' appeal is their inscrutability; the feeling that their motives are totally alien and possibly unknowable(beyond that sexy sexy assimilation of course!), so too much exposition can kind of ruin the magic too. I think it's wise to hew closer to the limited, pre- to during conversion POV as you suggest. But regardless of how you take it, I'm definitely hooked. All of your couples have been really likeable so far, but Ethan and Derek's dynamic is especially heartwarming and I hope they get to go on a big adventure ~~before their inevitable conversion~~

do you have a patreon @Neon Demon ?

I was going to say that this kind of mimic is somewhat less bad than the normal kind, but the lich finale at the end most likely makes it just as fatal. And if anyone was unaware of what liches do with defeated adventurers, well skeletons and zombies have to come from somewhere, you know.

Ngl, if this gets published as a book when it’s done, I’m absolutely buying it.

really hot! it left me wanting for more. Please continue!

Love the start you have here! Excited to see where it goes. Personally love some underwear/thong stuff if you're interested in that at all. One note on writing I'd recommend is separating some of your larger paragraphs into smaller ones so they are a bit easier to read. But your writing is otherwise very clear and does a great job of bringing the story to life. Looking forward to more!

So other than just reading the book I didn’t see how he summoned Asmodeus. But you know? So what? This was just super hot! Hope you continue this.

cerberus???