Recent Comments

4/15/23, 9:55 PM
i love this guy. He is so lovable and gullible. Thanks for the great storytelling.. You really are GREAT

4/15/23, 10:45 PM
Thanks for keeping me motivated I’m happy you enjoy Jake’s character. @[MChicago](/user/show/10024403)
4/15/23, 8:11 PM
Love the story! Can't wait for more!!

4/15/23, 10:44 PM
Glad you love it, can’t wait to write and share more! @[Taylor](/user/show/2690062)
4/15/23, 1:32 AM
A very good start!

4/15/23, 10:43 PM
Thanks for the Feedback!@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171)
4/15/23, 6:19 PM
Wow. You know what? I really loved that.

4/15/23, 8:49 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you! I was unsure about publishing it on this site but your comment already made it worth it.
4/15/23, 7:57 PM
Soo hot! I love this direction for the story. Can't wait to read more!!
max
4/15/23, 6:41 PM
can't wait for the full transformation, honestly great story, loving every moment of it

4/15/23, 6:59 PM
@max Thank you, mate, so glad you’re enjoying!
4/15/23, 5:04 PM
Glad you all enjoyed the story!
anonchub
4/15/23, 12:46 PM
love the story! my own little 4 incher is rock hard reading this!!!
Steve
4/15/23, 12:33 PM
It isn’t until I’m in the moment, reading another one of his stories, that I remember how Jack Parker has a way with words that puts me under his thrall, and makes the rest of the world disappear.
Anonymous
4/15/23, 11:54 AM
Oh wow...this was an amazing story. I'm really looking forward to seeing more from you, you're an amazing writer!