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Martin
5/15/23, 8:02 PM
I hope this is just the beginning of an amazing series!
5/15/23, 6:22 PM
Firstly, hot! Well done and enjoyable. My one aww was he had a butt in front of him and he didn't rim it and play with it. Hehe Also I'm all for helping the brother. I think him being a helpful good boy too would be great. Fun saga!
5/15/23, 6:05 PM
Love everything about this story! Hot cop getting his comeuppance! Fuck yeah
5/15/23, 4:13 PM
Great addition to the collections. I especially like how he pretend to be hard to please while enjoying the slave's desperate attempt to please his master. I also like how the slave's mind voice were very contradictory to how he present himself to his master. The scene where the slave licking his cum could be more detailed and elaborate I guess. The act of licking cum itself could be something that normally people detest or find it hard to do, in particular licking the floor could be describe as a lower-rung behavior. So I was thinking that the scene was quite anticlimactic; a bit more struggle inwardly if the hold of the hypnosis was quite powerful. Even if it was detestable or disgusting, he can do everything the master order and desires. I'm expecting what kind of shenanigans Dexter would do to the two brothers. Comparing physique and scrambling for their master's attention? It would be more fun if there were competitions between them.
5/15/23, 2:30 PM
Yeey, include big military bro
Kipper
5/15/23, 1:48 PM
I agree that there could have been meatier content here, perhaps giving details over several chapters. I grew up with a couple dudes with over 9 inches in their pants, and have met many more since. They all complained that they couldn't fuck women deeply, with their cockheads pounding into the cervix. Some discovered that men could handle more, but not always. It isn't a joy to be hung like that, and some of the stories here with 14-inch cocks basically turn me off. Still, his pubescent years, and a concerned father --whose genetics did, or did not contribute to his ever-growing appendage-- with commiseration of his plight, or jealous appreciation, led to some interesting anecdotes. Some detail of high school faggots who discovered his schlong and shared it, slobbering all over every bit of his crotch would have fit in nicely. Some straight high school stud teammate might have been the only candidate whose meaty ass wanted to get fucked by his giant cock out of mere curiosity. Maybe a college interview, where the dean succumbed to the tube steak hanging from his silky basketball shorts, could have marked the start of his undergraduate career. Being guided to a colleague who could mentor his graduate studies in exchange for tasting his pre-cum on a regular basis. Then, after a variety of such flashbacks, he could finally meet the enterprising Daddy. We never got to read the details of Daddy taking that cock in every imaginable position, both public and private. Anecdotes of some of the specific clients who paid thousands for their experiences with his horsemeat would have rounded out a series of up to 10 chapters! Definitely a missed opportunity here!
Kippers
5/15/23, 1:02 PM
I haven't yet read the second chapter about this arrogant supermodel, and the depraved past he was forced into, but you've already got my cock crying wet tears of endless prejizz. I think it would be great to hear about him on porn sets, but also stories of his manager arranging several investors to be present at modeling shoots for toothpaste and acne cream. Perhaps, they will linger after the photographers and sponsors leave, so they may praise his hard work in group admiration. Maybe, they would coerce him that a pre-shoot meeting is required to confirm if he's the right candidate for a hefty modeling contract. It could be immediately before the shoot, where the photographer finds they don't need to spray his body down to get the right glistening effect for a suntan lotion ad. Keep up the great work on your end, and I'll keep things up on this end. 😉
Anonymous
5/15/23, 11:30 AM
Was hoping to have an ending with a self-debased cop who loves getting dicked down. Definitely could use a part 2 where the punks meet a much more willing and horny cop looking to get used.
Gingcub
5/15/23, 11:29 AM
Love the setup here! Looking forward to the next chapter
Hottttt
5/15/23, 9:38 AM
It's hotter even the second time.