Great story !!

Very hot story!!! Did Dean becomes a God of sex at the end? If so, Loki might have been better at lying than most expected! Or maybe it ended up much better than he expected. Just a tiny problem, the switch between POVs are a bit jarring.

Heya it’s me and back with another theory that of Jamie and his possible future pup nature So like from chapter 4 and 5 we see that Jamie became a sort of mini pup drone because master wanted to play with him, but even after the mask was taken away, Jamie still was acting like a lil pet this puppy nature is fascinating because altheorizingly I think that it means Jamie soaked up much more from chapter 3, where the subliminal soaked into him as a primer for Master’s corruption/instruction. So I think Jamie for now on will ehibit some pup characteristics This also is kind of a tangent but the symbiote interacted and merged with Jamie while in pup mode, and jamie liked being a pup and being caressed and loved by Master and 005 midnight or Dusk; so, maybe jamie accepts his pup realignment on top of the superdrone one My prediction is that 013-to-be, can be placated by belly rubs, head scratching, hugs, sleeping together, and these are all ways master and his drones can use to convince Jamie to become a drone as part of the latex family. And who knows maybe he will puppy play date with Jack who is a “authentic” puppy drone

Amazing start, I can’t wait for more.

This is my second time reading this and if anything, it only got hotter on the re-read. I love this universe already and I can't wait to read more in it. I have to admit that, like other readers, it would be really hot to read through Patrick experiencing those changes and being molded, along with some of the aftermath. I'll be looking forward to more stories in this universe!

I definitely want to hear more about what happens to Patrick. You've created a very compelling future world here.

That was evil! I was so close to coming, and then no joi! very well written, and I love the concept!

Such a hot concept. I hope you keep going.

Great chapter, Cody finally dominated and ready to be used as a sexy cowboy boytoy he truly is. Two things intrigue me for the next chapters, though: First is Justin's position. Barely started and already tinkering with the mind control work that Dexter created. Even if it is not overlapping, yet, any orders or commands that the friend implemented in Chad, this is already worrying and potential conflicts could arise from this. After all, we don't know of any potential interests Justin has. Initially it may just be to humiliate Chad, but this could just be the beginning of an even bigger plot. Then there's the issue of Rich/potential slaves. It's more of a concern than a criticism. In the vast majority, if not all harem stories, the tendency is to have more quantity than memory of the protagonist's slaves. And right now, I think Rich illustrates that more than anything else: How relevant is he going to be when he's taken over by Dexter? We'll get to know who is the person behind the rich, handsome, intelligent and hard-working athlete, to the point of wanting to be the first in everything and who, because he was surpassed by his dumbest friend, ended up under the control of a nerd with a "god complex"? I mean, Rich isn't hot like Cody or intimidating like Chad or idle like Brad (and for that, he was transformed into a butler/bodyguard). If only Rich's father was a super hot millionaire daddy, then things would change a bit, because the young man would certainly serve as a bridge to make Dexter have the richest man in town under his power. And it would open doors for other daddies to get on our psycho poindexter's radar, like the aforementioned Papa Bauer (so many comments asking for it!). The fact that Rich is smarter than his other friends could also be useful for potential counseling. Despite my personal wishes, I also think this story makes more sense of having more young slaves than middle-aged ones. I love daddies, but these don't seem like Dexter's jam, at least from what we've seen so far. Not to mention that there are many types of young people in the world. The name of the series is "Master of the Jocks" after all. There must be other types of hot young athletes ready to be aligned to the protagonist's sexual needs.

I'm not really seeing the straight to gay tag being applicable here. Missing the revenge tag though.